V. Deepa Poet Haiku

Luscious Honey Comb

stuffed with nutriment
exuding nectar,while squashed~
   succulent for tongue

3-6-2020

~DEEPA~

Second place in the Contest.
Note:Fresh Traditional HAIKU (5-7-5)' Poetry Contest
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L. J. Carber June 7, 2020 at 10:54 AM Never ate it but I'll take your word for it-- congrats on your win! V. Deepa June 7, 2020 at 11:35 AM Ha ha...:-D Thankyou for your lovely appreciation Sir... Am sure you would love it.;-) Take care.Warm regards ~Deepa

Jan Allison June 6, 2020 at 4:37 PM My mum loved honeycomb - a joy to read your poem, many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx V. Deepa June 7, 2020 at 12:53 AM Oh that's lovely..my mum loves it too..:-D Thanks a bunch for your kind appreciation mam:-)I am glad that you enjoyed. Take care.Much love~Deepa

Aditi Mishra June 6, 2020 at 12:39 PM So much said in such few words Deepa! This is an exotic beauty. Congratulations on your win :) V. Deepa June 7, 2020 at 12:49 AM Thankyou for the lovely appreciation mam.I am pleased that you liked it.:-)Take care.With love~Deepa