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Luscious Honey Comb

stuffed with nutriment exuding nectar,while squashed~ succulent for tongue 3-6-2020 ~DEEPA~ Second place in the Contest. Note:Fresh Traditional HAIKU (5-7-5)' Poetry Contest Sponsored by JCB Burl

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L. J. Carber

Date: 6/7/2020 10:54:00 AM

Never ate it but I'll take your word for it-- congrats on your win!

V. Deepa
Date: 6/7/2020 11:35:00 AM

Ha ha...:-D Thankyou for your lovely appreciation Sir... Am sure you would love it.;-) Take care.Warm regards ~Deepa

Jan Allison

Date: 6/6/2020 4:37:00 PM

My mum loved honeycomb - a joy to read your poem, many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

V. Deepa
Date: 6/7/2020 12:53:00 AM

Oh that's lovely..my mum loves it too..:-D Thanks a bunch for your kind appreciation mam:-)I am glad that you enjoyed. Take care.Much love~Deepa

Aditi Mishra

Date: 6/6/2020 12:39:00 PM

So much said in such few words Deepa! This is an exotic beauty. Congratulations on your win :)

V. Deepa
Date: 6/7/2020 12:49:00 AM

Thankyou for the lovely appreciation mam.I am pleased that you liked it.:-)Take care.With love~Deepa