Lune Poetry

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Lune poetry

I.    Lune written in syllables - 3/5/3
II.   Lune written in words -    3/5/3


I.

I woke up
from a head trip dream
         or did I ...

II.

flight of imagination
the veil of sleep lingers
          between two realms ...

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January 07, 2023


Poetry/Lune/Example
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Roberto Delgado

Date: 2/26/2023 3:24:00 PM

This is cool. Like others, I'd never seen this form before. I really like the effect. Good work!

Constance La France
Date: 2/26/2023 3:43:00 PM

Roberto, thank you for the visit and for the compliment, I was experimenting, blessings, Constance

Alkas Poetry

Date: 1/8/2023 11:47:00 PM

lindo, LOVELY , salute, alkas

Constance La France
Date: 1/9/2023 12:27:00 PM

Alkas, thank you so much for the visit, comment and compliment, Constance

Sally Eslinger

Date: 1/8/2023 7:03:00 PM

I really fell into the combining of these two! Truly, i had Exactly the same mixed realms going on yesterday. But, sad, cause in one i was carrying home a lost mini Doodle puppy & woke, looking down to see if he was ok,,,nearly cried to realize id dreamed him! I’ll bet Heaven’s reception committee gets lots of ?s re:dreams. Just look what your excellent pen has provoked here. Look, Constance! They)re tossing flowers at you. Better courtsy quick! Hugs, sally

Constance La France
Date: 1/9/2023 12:31:00 PM

Sally, thank you so much for the visit, and lovely comment, and wonderful compliment, I have dreamt that my beloved pet who crossed rainbow bridge was back with me, and it took a while for me to accept that it was a dream only, then, of course came the weeping, blessings and hugs, Constance

Sotto Poet

Date: 1/7/2023 8:25:00 AM

That's a really interesting form you used, Constance. That's something new to me. I enjoyed reading this and wish you luck with the contest.

Constance La France
Date: 1/7/2023 11:27:00 PM

Sotto, thank you so much for the visit, comment, and encouragement, yes, I wanted to try this form that can be done two ways, with syllables or with words, I like both, Constance