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Lune poetry I. Lune written in syllables - 3/5/3 II. Lune written in words - 3/5/3 I. I woke up from a head trip dream or did I ... II. flight of imagination the veil of sleep lingers between two realms ... _______________________ January 07, 2023
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Date: 2/26/2023 3:24:00 PM
This is cool. Like others, I'd never seen this form before. I really like the effect. Good work!
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Date: 2/26/2023 3:43:00 PM
Roberto, thank you for the visit and for the compliment, I was experimenting, blessings, Constance
Date: 1/8/2023 11:47:00 PM
lindo, LOVELY , salute, alkas
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Date: 1/9/2023 12:27:00 PM
Alkas, thank you so much for the visit, comment and compliment, Constance
Date: 1/8/2023 7:03:00 PM
I really fell into the combining of these two! Truly, i had Exactly the same mixed realms going on yesterday. But, sad, cause in one i was carrying home a lost mini Doodle puppy & woke, looking down to see if he was ok,,,nearly cried to realize id dreamed him! I’ll bet Heaven’s reception committee gets lots of ?s re:dreams. Just look what your excellent pen has provoked here. Look, Constance! They)re tossing flowers at you. Better courtsy quick! Hugs, sally
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Date: 1/9/2023 12:31:00 PM
Sally, thank you so much for the visit, and lovely comment, and wonderful compliment, I have dreamt that my beloved pet who crossed rainbow bridge was back with me, and it took a while for me to accept that it was a dream only, then, of course came the weeping, blessings and hugs, Constance
Date: 1/7/2023 8:25:00 AM
That's a really interesting form you used, Constance.  That's something new to me.  I enjoyed reading this and wish you luck with the contest.
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Date: 1/7/2023 11:27:00 PM
Sotto, thank you so much for the visit, comment, and encouragement, yes, I wanted to try this form that can be done two ways, with syllables or with words, I like both, Constance
Date: 1/7/2023 3:09:00 AM
- An interesting form, Constance - Like this a lot ... best wishes in the contest :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs
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Date: 1/7/2023 6:32:00 AM
Sunshine, thank you so much for the visit, comment and compliment, hugs, Constance
Date: 1/7/2023 3:05:00 AM
I love this, Constance. The poem, the form...everything about it!
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Date: 1/7/2023 6:32:00 AM
Charlie, thank you so much for the visit, comment and compliment, Constance

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