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Lunch On the Run

. Dragonfly hovers Blackbird swoop down stealthily__ Death on SUMMER day

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/21/2010 8:56:00 AM

Congratulations, Sara, on your dark haiku here! It was great! Luv, andrea

Mitch White

Date: 5/20/2010 6:19:00 AM

Creative to say the least- I Likey Congrats to you Sara

Kim M

Date: 5/18/2010 9:10:00 PM

Sara, After reading this lovely haiku, the title made me sort-of chuckle and smile. Very nice strict haiku.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/18/2010 12:31:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Charles's "Strict Haiku" contest Sara. Love, Carol

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 5/18/2010 9:04:00 AM

Congrats on your 2nd Place win in the contest, Sara! Very nice......hugs, Jimmy

Amy Green

Date: 5/18/2010 8:10:00 AM

I really like the theme, congrats! Great Haiku.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/18/2010 7:50:00 AM

Congrats Sara on your winning poem in the Strictly Haiku contest with this awesome write ..knew it first time I read it.. enjoy a sweet victory ..luv.. Linda-Marie..

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/18/2010 6:57:00 AM

Dramatic and wonderful haiku! Congratulations, Sara! ~ Carrie

Charles Henderson

Date: 5/17/2010 11:43:00 PM

Congratulations on your awesome 3rd place win in my contest!!!!--------Charles

Sue Mason

Date: 5/16/2010 3:32:00 PM

This title is such a play on the haiku !! Has me laughing at a dying dragonfly .... oh dear ... smile ... thanks for your recent comment, Sara. I do hope you are enjoying your spring!!

John Freeman

Date: 5/16/2010 12:36:00 PM

Love this one too Sara, Keep the paranormal pen flowing. Agape, Moses

Gert W. Knop

Date: 5/16/2010 4:03:00 AM

wow! Happy blackbird got a nice meal, Sara. Enjoyed reading your Haiku! We got lots of blackbirds here and they won't flay away-they#re too lazy and prefer to walk away if one comes too close. If you like Jazz than you shoud check on youtube for "The Modern Jazz Quartet" it's worthwhile listening...Thanks for your comments and have a nice Sunday...Gert

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 5/15/2010 7:30:00 PM

He got his meal then Boom?

Lynette Chachere

Date: 5/15/2010 5:40:00 PM

such scary imagery for this dragon fly being swallowed by a black bird. i imagined a large bird in my mind. . . an expert with short poems, as always, Sara. -Always&Forever Lynette

Brian Strand

Date: 5/15/2010 12:18:00 AM

The circle of life continues Sara.Rgds Brian

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/14/2010 7:50:00 PM

What a witty title for this haiku gem, Sara. Guess the blackbird takes advantage of his "lunch on the run." Enjoyed! Wishing you success in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/14/2010 6:57:00 PM

Very good .. I like this entire Haiku with your punctuation marks so prominent..good luck in the new Haiku contest... SOUP MAIL..luv.. Linda-Marie..

Rick Parise

Date: 5/14/2010 6:29:00 PM

Nice imagery~did you wittness this? I like your scape , like know other!!!~Rick

Rick Parise

Date: 5/14/2010 6:27:00 PM

Oh and I forgot the word "gold" refers to earth tones~~~Im always explaining ~read it once more and let me know~~~Your friend Rick