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Lunch On the Run

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                                                        Dragonfly hovers
                                           Blackbird swoop down stealthily__
                                                  Death on SUMMER day

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Andrea Dietrich

May 21, 2010 at 8:56 AM

Congratulations, Sara, on your dark haiku here! It was great! Luv, andrea

Mitch White

May 20, 2010 at 6:19 AM

Creative to say the least- I Likey Congrats to you Sara

Kim M

May 18, 2010 at 9:10 PM

Sara, After reading this lovely haiku, the title made me sort-of chuckle and smile. Very nice strict haiku.

Carol Sunshine Brown

May 18, 2010 at 12:31 PM

Congratulations on your win in Charles's "Strict Haiku" contest Sara. Love, Carol

Jimmy Anderson

May 18, 2010 at 9:04 AM

Congrats on your 2nd Place win in the contest, Sara! Very nice......hugs, Jimmy

Amy Green

May 18, 2010 at 8:10 AM

I really like the theme, congrats! Great Haiku.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

May 18, 2010 at 7:50 AM

Congrats Sara on your winning poem in the Strictly Haiku contest with this awesome write ..knew it first time I read it.. enjoy a sweet victory ..luv.. Linda-Marie..

Carrie Richards

May 18, 2010 at 6:57 AM

Dramatic and wonderful haiku! Congratulations, Sara! ~ Carrie

Charles Henderson

May 17, 2010 at 11:43 PM

Congratulations on your awesome 3rd place win in my contest!!!!--------Charles

Sue Mason

May 16, 2010 at 3:32 PM

This title is such a play on the haiku !! Has me laughing at a dying dragonfly .... oh dear ... smile ... thanks for your recent comment, Sara. I do hope you are enjoying your spring!!

John Freeman

May 16, 2010 at 12:36 PM

Love this one too Sara, Keep the paranormal pen flowing. Agape, Moses

Gert W. Knop

May 16, 2010 at 4:03 AM

wow! Happy blackbird got a nice meal, Sara. Enjoyed reading your Haiku! We got lots of blackbirds here and they won't flay away-they#re too lazy and prefer to walk away if one comes too close. If you like Jazz than you shoud check on youtube for "The Modern Jazz Quartet" it's worthwhile listening...Thanks for your comments and have a nice Sunday...Gert

Doris Culverhouse

May 15, 2010 at 7:30 PM

He got his meal then Boom?

Lynette Chachere

May 15, 2010 at 5:40 PM

such scary imagery for this dragon fly being swallowed by a black bird. i imagined a large bird in my mind. . . an expert with short poems, as always, Sara. -Always&Forever Lynette

Brian Strand

May 15, 2010 at 12:18 AM

The circle of life continues Sara.Rgds Brian

Carolyn Devonshire

May 14, 2010 at 7:50 PM

What a witty title for this haiku gem, Sara. Guess the blackbird takes advantage of his "lunch on the run." Enjoyed! Wishing you success in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

May 14, 2010 at 6:57 PM

Very good .. I like this entire Haiku with your punctuation marks so prominent..good luck in the new Haiku contest... SOUP MAIL..luv.. Linda-Marie..

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