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Lunch On the Run

. Dragonfly hovers Blackbird swoop down stealthily__ Death on SUMMER day

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/21/2010 8:56:00 AM
Congratulations, Sara, on your dark haiku here! It was great! Luv, andrea
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Date: 5/20/2010 6:19:00 AM
Creative to say the least- I Likey Congrats to you Sara
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Date: 5/18/2010 9:10:00 PM
Sara, After reading this lovely haiku, the title made me sort-of chuckle and smile. Very nice strict haiku.
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Date: 5/18/2010 12:31:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Charles's "Strict Haiku" contest Sara. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/18/2010 9:04:00 AM
Congrats on your 2nd Place win in the contest, Sara! Very nice......hugs, Jimmy
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Date: 5/18/2010 8:10:00 AM
I really like the theme, congrats! Great Haiku.
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Date: 5/18/2010 7:50:00 AM
Congrats Sara on your winning poem in the Strictly Haiku contest with this awesome write ..knew it first time I read it.. enjoy a sweet victory ..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 5/18/2010 6:57:00 AM
Dramatic and wonderful haiku! Congratulations, Sara! ~ Carrie
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Date: 5/17/2010 11:43:00 PM
Congratulations on your awesome 3rd place win in my contest!!!!--------Charles
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Date: 5/16/2010 3:32:00 PM
This title is such a play on the haiku !! Has me laughing at a dying dragonfly .... oh dear ... smile ... thanks for your recent comment, Sara. I do hope you are enjoying your spring!!
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Date: 5/16/2010 12:36:00 PM
Love this one too Sara, Keep the paranormal pen flowing. Agape, Moses
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Date: 5/16/2010 4:03:00 AM
wow! Happy blackbird got a nice meal, Sara. Enjoyed reading your Haiku! We got lots of blackbirds here and they won't flay away-they#re too lazy and prefer to walk away if one comes too close. If you like Jazz than you shoud check on youtube for "The Modern Jazz Quartet" it's worthwhile listening...Thanks for your comments and have a nice Sunday...Gert
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Date: 5/15/2010 7:30:00 PM
He got his meal then Boom?
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Date: 5/15/2010 5:40:00 PM
such scary imagery for this dragon fly being swallowed by a black bird. i imagined a large bird in my mind. . . an expert with short poems, as always, Sara. -Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 5/15/2010 12:18:00 AM
The circle of life continues Sara.Rgds Brian
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Date: 5/14/2010 7:50:00 PM
What a witty title for this haiku gem, Sara. Guess the blackbird takes advantage of his "lunch on the run." Enjoyed! Wishing you success in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/14/2010 6:57:00 PM
Very good .. I like this entire Haiku with your punctuation marks so prominent..good luck in the new Haiku contest... SOUP MAIL..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 5/14/2010 6:29:00 PM
Nice imagery~did you wittness this? I like your scape , like know other!!!~Rick
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Date: 5/14/2010 6:27:00 PM
Oh and I forgot the word "gold" refers to earth tones~~~Im always explaining ~read it once more and let me know~~~Your friend Rick
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