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Lunch On the Run

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                                                        Dragonfly hovers
                                           Blackbird swoop down stealthily__
                                                  Death on SUMMER day

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Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/21/2010 8:56:00 AM Congratulations, Sara, on your dark haiku here! It was great! Luv, andrea Login to Reply

Mitch White Date: 5/20/2010 6:19:00 AM Creative to say the least- I Likey Congrats to you Sara Login to Reply

Kim M Date: 5/18/2010 9:10:00 PM Sara, After reading this lovely haiku, the title made me sort-of chuckle and smile. Very nice strict haiku. Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 5/18/2010 12:31:00 PM Congratulations on your win in Charles's "Strict Haiku" contest Sara. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Jimmy Anderson Date: 5/18/2010 9:04:00 AM Congrats on your 2nd Place win in the contest, Sara! Very nice......hugs, Jimmy Login to Reply

Amy Green Date: 5/18/2010 8:10:00 AM I really like the theme, congrats! Great Haiku. Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 5/18/2010 7:50:00 AM Congrats Sara on your winning poem in the Strictly Haiku contest with this awesome write ..knew it first time I read it.. enjoy a sweet victory ..luv.. Linda-Marie.. Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 5/18/2010 6:57:00 AM Dramatic and wonderful haiku! Congratulations, Sara! ~ Carrie Login to Reply

Charles Henderson Date: 5/17/2010 11:43:00 PM Congratulations on your awesome 3rd place win in my contest!!!!--------Charles Login to Reply

Sue Mason Date: 5/16/2010 3:32:00 PM This title is such a play on the haiku !! Has me laughing at a dying dragonfly .... oh dear ... smile ... thanks for your recent comment, Sara. I do hope you are enjoying your spring!! Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 5/16/2010 12:36:00 PM Love this one too Sara, Keep the paranormal pen flowing. Agape, Moses Login to Reply

Gert W. Knop Date: 5/16/2010 4:03:00 AM wow! Happy blackbird got a nice meal, Sara. Enjoyed reading your Haiku! We got lots of blackbirds here and they won't flay away-they#re too lazy and prefer to walk away if one comes too close. If you like Jazz than you shoud check on youtube for "The Modern Jazz Quartet" it's worthwhile listening...Thanks for your comments and have a nice Sunday...Gert Login to Reply

Doris Culverhouse Date: 5/15/2010 7:30:00 PM He got his meal then Boom? Login to Reply

Lynette Chachere Date: 5/15/2010 5:40:00 PM such scary imagery for this dragon fly being swallowed by a black bird. i imagined a large bird in my mind. . . an expert with short poems, as always, Sara. -Always&Forever Lynette Login to Reply

Brian Strand Date: 5/15/2010 12:18:00 AM The circle of life continues Sara.Rgds Brian Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 5/14/2010 7:50:00 PM What a witty title for this haiku gem, Sara. Guess the blackbird takes advantage of his "lunch on the run." Enjoyed! Wishing you success in the contest. Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 5/14/2010 6:57:00 PM Very good .. I like this entire Haiku with your punctuation marks so prominent..good luck in the new Haiku contest... SOUP MAIL..luv.. Linda-Marie.. Login to Reply