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Lunar Woods

The darkest crevice bares the strongest light Dispersing bright sun over shadows white pale Barren trees stand against snow laden blight Tips of fresh grass poke heads above the trail The owl swoops down to the death of the mouse While winds howl free across the moons dead face Shadowed spaces hide beasts preying on Grouse Polar ponds stilled where sly fish find their place Frost bound trails that crunch and squeak with each step My arctic heart fills with calls of sleepless sounds While stars fall to escape like dreams unkept For the spawning tides of spring to abound Lifted by this arrant winter's cold night The darkest crevice bares the strongest light Rewritten October 10, 2020 Completely Your Choice Poetry Contest 24 Sponsored by Brian Strand

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Date: 1/24/2022 1:54:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! I am impressed by the line : "The darkest crevice bares the strongest light"...so profound! :) Paulette
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 2/1/2022 11:53:00 AM
Thank you Paulette.
Date: 1/23/2022 8:23:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Lonna . Hugs and blessings for a better year in your life
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 2/1/2022 11:52:00 AM
Good to hear from you Eve. Thanks for the hugs!
Date: 1/23/2022 6:54:00 PM
"The owl swoops down to the death of the mouse" - So realistic scene. Beautiful sonnet. Congratulations!
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 2/1/2022 11:52:00 AM
So happy you enjoyed it.
Date: 1/23/2022 4:57:00 PM
A very lovely sonnet I remember reading not long ago Lonna. Winter enchantment! Congratulations! Blessings xxoo
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 2/1/2022 11:52:00 AM
Hi Connie, sorry it taken me so long to reply, but thank you again!
Date: 6/7/2019 9:58:00 PM
Impressive undertaking that overwhelms passing hearts with a delicate outstretched touch of edged words whereto, it leaves an indelible mark that is timeless Lonna--BRAVO! Aloha William
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 6/8/2019 12:43:00 PM
Coming from someone who shares knowing the beauty of the nature of all things, your comments are priceless! Thanks
Date: 6/7/2019 8:59:00 PM
A beautiful sonnet, and wonderful imagery Lonna.
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 6/8/2019 12:44:00 PM
Absolutely love hearing your comments! Much thanks

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