Lunar Woods

The darkest crevice bares the strongest light
Dispersing bright sun over shadows white pale
Barren trees stand against snow laden blight
Tips of fresh grass poke heads above the trail

The owl swoops down to the death of the mouse
While winds howl free across the moons dead face
Shadowed spaces hide beasts preying on Grouse
Polar ponds stilled where sly fish find their place

Frost bound trails that crunch and squeak with each step
My arctic heart fills with calls of sleepless sounds
While stars fall to escape like dreams unkept
For the spawning tides of spring to abound

Lifted by this arrant winter's cold night
The darkest crevice bares the strongest light

Rewritten October 10, 2020


Completely Your Choice Poetry Contest 24
Sponsored by Brian Strand
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Calasibetta Avatar
January 24, 2022 at 1:54 PM
Congratulations on your win! I am impressed by the line : "The darkest crevice bares the strongest light"...so profound! :) Paulette
Blodgett Avatar
February 1, 2022 at 11:53 AM
Thank you Paulette.
Roper Avatar
January 23, 2022 at 8:23 PM
Congratulations on your win, Lonna . Hugs and blessings for a better year in your life
Blodgett Avatar
February 1, 2022 at 11:52 AM
Good to hear from you Eve. Thanks for the hugs!
Alex Avatar
January 23, 2022 at 6:54 PM
"The owl swoops down to the death of the mouse" - So realistic scene. Beautiful sonnet. Congratulations!
Blodgett Avatar
February 1, 2022 at 11:52 AM
So happy you enjoyed it.
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 23, 2022 at 4:57 PM
A very lovely sonnet I remember reading not long ago Lonna. Winter enchantment! Congratulations! Blessings xxoo
Blodgett Avatar
February 1, 2022 at 11:52 AM
Hi Connie, sorry it taken me so long to reply, but thank you again!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
June 7, 2019 at 9:58 PM
Impressive undertaking that overwhelms passing hearts with a delicate outstretched touch of edged words whereto, it leaves an indelible mark that is timeless Lonna--BRAVO! Aloha William
Blodgett Avatar
June 8, 2019 at 12:43 PM
Coming from someone who shares knowing the beauty of the nature of all things, your comments are priceless! Thanks
Krutsinger Avatar
June 7, 2019 at 8:59 PM
A beautiful sonnet, and wonderful imagery Lonna.
Blodgett Avatar
June 8, 2019 at 12:44 PM
Absolutely love hearing your comments! Much thanks
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