Lunar Rays

Nightfall in Autumn, Natural light imbues the path; Moonbeams through the trees.

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Charlene Bird

Date: 6/11/2009 8:41:00 PM

You have a beautiful creative mind dear friend, this is lovely.

James Fraser

Date: 6/11/2009 2:20:00 AM

Raul, every Haiku of yours turns my mind into an instant camera, the way you write them makes me picture your write in seconds, so much in fact, some poems of mine have been inspired by either one word or a picture i have flashed before my eyes, thank you for all of them and i can't wait to read your future writes> James

James Marshall Goff

Date: 6/10/2009 7:33:00 PM

I adore moonbeams! makes me want to throw "night-boomerangs" Jim

Sharon Winter

Date: 6/10/2009 6:18:00 PM

I wish it were Autumn right now. I can feel it here in your poem so cool and crisp at night. I am not a humid, muggy summer person. :( Love, Shar

Christopher Higgins

Date: 6/10/2009 4:22:00 PM

Great visuals with this piece...well done.