Lunar Rays

Nightfall in Autumn,
Natural light imbues the path;
Moonbeams through the trees.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Bird Avatar
June 11, 2009 at 8:41 PM
You have a beautiful creative mind dear friend, this is lovely.
Fraser Avatar
June 11, 2009 at 2:20 AM
Raul, every Haiku of yours turns my mind into an instant camera, the way you write them makes me picture your write in seconds, so much in fact, some poems of mine have been inspired by either one word or a picture i have flashed before my eyes, thank you for all of them and i can't wait to read your future writes> James
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June 10, 2009 at 7:33 PM
I adore moonbeams! makes me want to throw "night-boomerangs" Jim
Winter Avatar
June 10, 2009 at 6:18 PM
I wish it were Autumn right now. I can feel it here in your poem so cool and crisp at night. I am not a humid, muggy summer person. :( Love, Shar
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June 10, 2009 at 4:22 PM
Great visuals with this piece...well done.
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