Lunar Moth

Flapping desperately
  Velvet eyes confuse sometimes-
      Moth flies in moon beams
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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March 17, 2014 at 4:27 AM
I haven't seen one of those large insects in years. Someone brought one to class in a jar when I was in fourth grade. It was a big green one. This is a descriptive three lines.
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