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Lunar Eclipse

There was this man overtly obsessed Thought the mystique moon he possessed A poet, on the wings of muse he flew Riding the moonbeams of his own he knew. So in the dark night of the lunar eclipse When the masked moon went out of his grips He became so sad that in dismal dismay Threw all his moon starved poems far away. But as the full silver disc appeared once again He melted in the moonlight his agony and pain With the moondust he made his image poetic People said the moonstruck man is a lunatic.
June 12, 2018 For Brian Strand's Contest All Yours (Mar 24)

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Date: 6/22/2018 3:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this clever well-written poem. :)
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 6/22/2018 3:53:00 AM
Thank you, Susan.
Date: 6/20/2018 12:27:00 AM
Wonderful story and rhyme, Subimal - blessings and congrats on your win, my friend! :-)
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 6/20/2018 11:28:00 PM
Thank you so much, Greg.
Date: 6/18/2018 10:31:00 PM
Lovely story , Subimal, well deserving win....Congratulations ! Hugs Eve ~’ *
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 6/19/2018 4:58:00 AM
Many thanks, Eve.
Date: 6/18/2018 7:48:00 AM
Clever well written piece Subimal! Enjoyed :) Congratulations on your win! xomo
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 6/19/2018 4:58:00 AM
Thank you, Maureen
Date: 6/17/2018 4:55:00 PM
Very nicely penned Subimal.. Congrats on your win ..
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 6/18/2018 5:05:00 AM
hank you so much, Joseph.
Date: 6/17/2018 4:48:00 PM
This is such a very creative and witty piece - congratulations on your well-deserved win! Hugs. Pandita
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 6/18/2018 5:05:00 AM
Thank you so much. Pandita for your visit and comments.
Date: 6/17/2018 3:59:00 PM
Congrats on your podium finish. Well done, Subimal.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 6/18/2018 5:04:00 AM
Thank you, Line.

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