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I had a dreamy dream, that I was a moon beam; a pretty goddess queen, holding the moon. It was warm in my hands, this full moon of all lands; shifting like desert sands, I felt no gloom. It was so heavenly, picked from the ebony; melting liquid freely, oh sweet perfume. Filigree blended lace, I press it to my face; this moon I now embrace, must let go soon. Oh moon let me ponder, of your beauty wonder; oh, sweet orb of silver, transparent moon. ____________________________ March 3, 2019 Poetry/Violette/Rhyme/Luna Moon Copyright Protected, ID 19-1120-942-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Liquid Luna Lace sponsor, Chantelle Anne Cooke First Place

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Date: 3/18/2019 2:35:00 AM
Wow... Dear Heart this is utterly divine!!! I adore the Moon and to hold her in your hands, such enchanting imagery and a FAV for me. Thank you and kindest thoughts from Ann xx
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Date: 3/18/2019 12:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Constance. Great imagery.
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Date: 3/4/2019 8:46:00 AM
Very nice! :)
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Date: 3/3/2019 10:00:00 PM
This one made me want to leave my earth body, and fly up to the moon to give her a gentle touch, Constance. Lovely!
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Date: 3/3/2019 7:23:00 PM
I love poetry about the moon and yours is exceptional Constance! I am sure this fabulous poem with be on the winner's list my friend! : ) xxoo
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