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Luna Dreams Fair myth faintly draped sweet tongues, disrobe moist lips. Voluptuous softness laud splashed scripts, decors solicitous themes. Legendary streams... lissome tune, dreams, cast hints, swoon, splitting well-worn seams, illuminates striking beams. Phantasmagoric lunar eclipse, fair myth faintly draped sweet tongues, disrobe moist lips. ***The Andaree was created by our very own Andrea Dietrich, it has a syllable count of 11-9-7-5-3-1-3-5-7-9-11, and a rhyme scheme of "AabbcbcbbaA" and Line 1 is repeated in line 11. It is to be centered. 2020 July 11 *2nd Place* Andaree - 11 Lines ~~Joseph May

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Date: 7/27/2020 3:28:00 AM
I am always amazed by your top notch imagery William, yet you come up with something extraordinary every time. Comgratulations on your win. Blessings :)
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William Kekaula
Date: 7/27/2020 4:43:00 AM
Many thanks your way, Aditi, for I am truly touched beyond measure, my friend -- Aloha~@William
Date: 7/19/2020 3:37:00 PM
gorgeous imagery, William, and what a great red moon you showed us!! Congrats with Andaree form!
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Date: 7/19/2020 3:40:00 PM
Twas a challenge indeed, Andrea, I am glad you liked it -- Aloha~@William
Date: 7/19/2020 12:29:00 PM
Luna at her best, entices romantic moods in all. Very lovely William! Congratulations on your second place win my friend. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 7/19/2020 12:44:00 PM
Mahalo nui, Connie, your gracious words bundled in Aloha, are always greatly appreciated -- Aloha~@William
Date: 7/19/2020 6:57:00 AM
Luna will have to share the glory of this winning write, William. She and you are worthy. Congratulations.
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Date: 7/19/2020 12:36:00 PM
A grateful thanks, Jenna, for your kind and thoughtful share -- Aloha~@William
Date: 7/19/2020 6:56:00 AM
Congrats!! on the great win my friend...a seducing entry...best wishes...^WW^ :o)
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Date: 7/19/2020 12:34:00 PM
Many thanks, ^WW^, for your time and considerations -- Aloha~@William
Date: 7/18/2020 4:31:00 PM
Beautifully sensual imagery , many congratulations on your win :-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/18/2020 4:33:00 PM
My extended courtesies, Jan, for your kind sharing -- Aloha~@William
Date: 7/18/2020 12:51:00 PM
Luna dripping crimson into the depths, A fine write William, Congrats on your win
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William Kekaula
Date: 7/18/2020 1:58:00 PM
Thank you, Joseph, for the opportunity and my honorable placement -- Aloha~@William
Date: 7/12/2020 1:58:00 AM
William, this is exquisitely done for sure! Every word lingers in my imagination.
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Date: 7/12/2020 2:10:00 AM
Spare no room for articles or prepositions, dear Caren, hearty thanks truly, my friend -- Aloha from Hawaii~@William