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Luna Dreams

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*Image of Red Moon by Gifer.

Luna Dreams

Fair myth faintly draped sweet tongues, disrobe moist lips.
Voluptuous softness laud splashed scripts,
decors solicitous themes.
Legendary streams...
lissome tune,
dreams,
cast hints, swoon,
splitting well-worn seams,
illuminates striking beams.
Phantasmagoric lunar eclipse,
fair myth faintly draped sweet tongues, disrobe moist lips.

*The Andaree was created by our very own Andrea Dietrich, it has a syllable count of 11-9-7-5-3-1-3-5-7-9-11, and a rhyme scheme of "AabbcbcbbaA" and Line 1 is repeated in line 11. It is to be centered.

2020 July 11
*2nd Place*
Andaree - 11 Lines
~~Joseph May: Judged 2020 July 18

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Aditi Mishra Date: 7/27/2020 3:28:00 AM I am always amazed by your top notch imagery William, yet you come up with something extraordinary every time. Comgratulations on your win. Blessings :) Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 7/27/2020 4:43:00 AM Many thanks your way, Aditi, for I am truly touched beyond measure, my friend -- Aloha~@William

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/19/2020 3:37:00 PM gorgeous imagery, William, and what a great red moon you showed us!! Congrats with Andaree form! Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 7/19/2020 3:40:00 PM Twas a challenge indeed, Andrea, I am glad you liked it -- Aloha~@William

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 7/19/2020 12:29:00 PM Luna at her best, entices romantic moods in all. Very lovely William! Congratulations on your second place win my friend. Blessings xxoo Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 7/19/2020 12:44:00 PM Mahalo nui, Connie, your gracious words bundled in Aloha, are always greatly appreciated -- Aloha~@William

Jenna Logan Date: 7/19/2020 6:57:00 AM Luna will have to share the glory of this winning write, William. She and you are worthy. Congratulations. Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 7/19/2020 12:36:00 PM A grateful thanks, Jenna, for your kind and thoughtful share -- Aloha~@William

Winged Warrior Date: 7/19/2020 6:56:00 AM Congrats!! on the great win my friend...a seducing entry...best wishes...^WW^ :o) Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 7/19/2020 12:34:00 PM Many thanks, ^WW^, for your time and considerations -- Aloha~@William

Jan Allison Date: 7/18/2020 4:31:00 PM Beautifully sensual imagery , many congratulations on your win :-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 7/18/2020 4:33:00 PM My extended courtesies, Jan, for your kind sharing -- Aloha~@William

Joseph May Date: 7/18/2020 12:51:00 PM Luna dripping crimson into the depths, A fine write William, Congrats on your win Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 7/18/2020 1:58:00 PM Thank you, Joseph, for the opportunity and my honorable placement -- Aloha~@William

Caren Krutsinger Date: 7/12/2020 1:58:00 AM William, this is exquisitely done for sure! Every word lingers in my imagination. Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 7/12/2020 2:10:00 AM Spare no room for articles or prepositions, dear Caren, hearty thanks truly, my friend -- Aloha from Hawaii~@William