William Kelii Kekaula Poet Rhyme

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Luna Dreams

*Image of Red Moon by Gifer.

Luna Dreams

Fair myth faintly draped sweet tongues, disrobe moist lips.
Voluptuous softness laud splashed scripts,
decors solicitous themes.
Legendary streams...
lissome tune,
dreams,
cast hints, swoon,
splitting well-worn seams,
illuminates striking beams.
Phantasmagoric lunar eclipse,
fair myth faintly draped sweet tongues, disrobe moist lips.

*The Andaree was created by our very own Andrea Dietrich, it has a syllable count of 11-9-7-5-3-1-3-5-7-9-11, and a rhyme scheme of "AabbcbcbbaA" and Line 1 is repeated in line 11. It is to be centered.

2020 July 11
*2nd Place*
Andaree - 11 Lines
~~Joseph May: Judged 2020 July 18

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Aditi Mishra July 27, 2020 at 3:28 AM I am always amazed by your top notch imagery William, yet you come up with something extraordinary every time. Comgratulations on your win. Blessings :) William Kelii Kekaula July 27, 2020 at 4:43 AM Many thanks your way, Aditi, for I am truly touched beyond measure, my friend -- Aloha~@William

Andrea Dietrich July 19, 2020 at 3:37 PM gorgeous imagery, William, and what a great red moon you showed us!! Congrats with Andaree form! William Kelii Kekaula July 19, 2020 at 3:40 PM Twas a challenge indeed, Andrea, I am glad you liked it -- Aloha~@William

Connie Marcum Wong July 19, 2020 at 12:29 PM Luna at her best, entices romantic moods in all. Very lovely William! Congratulations on your second place win my friend. Blessings xxoo William Kelii Kekaula July 19, 2020 at 12:44 PM Mahalo nui, Connie, your gracious words bundled in Aloha, are always greatly appreciated -- Aloha~@William

Jenna Logan July 19, 2020 at 6:57 AM Luna will have to share the glory of this winning write, William. She and you are worthy. Congratulations. William Kelii Kekaula July 19, 2020 at 12:36 PM A grateful thanks, Jenna, for your kind and thoughtful share -- Aloha~@William

Winged Warrior July 19, 2020 at 6:56 AM Congrats!! on the great win my friend...a seducing entry...best wishes...^WW^ :o) William Kelii Kekaula July 19, 2020 at 12:34 PM Many thanks, ^WW^, for your time and considerations -- Aloha~@William

Jan Allison July 18, 2020 at 4:31 PM Beautifully sensual imagery , many congratulations on your win :-) hugs Jan xx William Kelii Kekaula July 18, 2020 at 4:33 PM My extended courtesies, Jan, for your kind sharing -- Aloha~@William

Joseph May July 18, 2020 at 12:51 PM Luna dripping crimson into the depths, A fine write William, Congrats on your win William Kelii Kekaula July 18, 2020 at 1:58 PM Thank you, Joseph, for the opportunity and my honorable placement -- Aloha~@William

Caren Krutsinger July 12, 2020 at 1:58 AM William, this is exquisitely done for sure! Every word lingers in my imagination. William Kelii Kekaula July 12, 2020 at 2:10 AM Spare no room for articles or prepositions, dear Caren, hearty thanks truly, my friend -- Aloha from Hawaii~@William