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*Image of Red Moon by Gifer. Luna Dreams Fair myth faintly draped sweet tongues, disrobe moist lips. Voluptuous softness laud splashed scripts, decors solicitous themes. Legendary streams... lissome tune, dreams, cast hints, swoon, splitting well-worn seams, illuminates striking beams. Phantasmagoric lunar eclipse, fair myth faintly draped sweet tongues, disrobe moist lips. *The Andaree was created by our very own Andrea Dietrich, it has a syllable count of 11-9-7-5-3-1-3-5-7-9-11, and a rhyme scheme of "AabbcbcbbaA" and Line 1 is repeated in line 11. It is to be centered. 2020 July 11 *2nd Place* Andaree - 11 Lines ~~Joseph May: Judged 2020 July 18

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Aditi Mishra

Date: 7/27/2020 3:28:00 AM

I am always amazed by your top notch imagery William, yet you come up with something extraordinary every time. Comgratulations on your win. Blessings :)

Hilo Poet
Date: 7/27/2020 4:43:00 AM

Many thanks your way, Aditi, for I am truly touched beyond measure, my friend -- Aloha~@William

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/19/2020 3:37:00 PM

gorgeous imagery, William, and what a great red moon you showed us!! Congrats with Andaree form!

Hilo Poet
Date: 7/19/2020 3:40:00 PM

Twas a challenge indeed, Andrea, I am glad you liked it -- Aloha~@William

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/19/2020 12:29:00 PM

Luna at her best, entices romantic moods in all. Very lovely William! Congratulations on your second place win my friend. Blessings xxoo

Hilo Poet
Date: 7/19/2020 12:44:00 PM

Mahalo nui, Connie, your gracious words bundled in Aloha, are always greatly appreciated -- Aloha~@William

Jenna Logan

Date: 7/19/2020 6:57:00 AM

Luna will have to share the glory of this winning write, William. She and you are worthy. Congratulations.

Hilo Poet
Date: 7/19/2020 12:36:00 PM

A grateful thanks, Jenna, for your kind and thoughtful share -- Aloha~@William

Winged Warrior

Date: 7/19/2020 6:56:00 AM

Congrats!! on the great win my friend...a seducing entry...best wishes...^WW^ :o)

Hilo Poet
Date: 7/19/2020 12:34:00 PM

Many thanks, ^WW^, for your time and considerations -- Aloha~@William

Jan Allison

Date: 7/18/2020 4:31:00 PM

Beautifully sensual imagery , many congratulations on your win :-) hugs Jan xx

Hilo Poet
Date: 7/18/2020 4:33:00 PM

My extended courtesies, Jan, for your kind sharing -- Aloha~@William

Joseph May

Date: 7/18/2020 12:51:00 PM

Luna dripping crimson into the depths, A fine write William, Congrats on your win

Hilo Poet
Date: 7/18/2020 1:58:00 PM

Thank you, Joseph, for the opportunity and my honorable placement -- Aloha~@William

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/12/2020 1:58:00 AM

William, this is exquisitely done for sure! Every word lingers in my imagination.

Hilo Poet
Date: 7/12/2020 2:10:00 AM

Spare no room for articles or prepositions, dear Caren, hearty thanks truly, my friend -- Aloha from Hawaii~@William