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Lump In My Throat

I remember Your smile When you told me You wanted to be a writer More than that What you wrote You sliced me apart And stuffed my faults Down my throat You could not swallow That I was choked I look you up once in a while Curious to see if you made it You were so damn talented To this day I still have a lump Sunday September 30th 2018 Remembering What You Want To Forget Poetry Contest Sponsored By Kim Rodrigues

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/15/2018 3:31:00 PM

With a lump in MY throat, I extend congratulations on your placement in the contest. Best always, Gershon

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 10/16/2018 8:19:00 AM

Thank you my dear friend. xomo <3

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/15/2018 2:45:00 PM

Hi Maureen, Some folk live to make others miserable because deep down they are miserable themselves. Congratulations on your placement in the contest- Alexis

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 10/16/2018 8:19:00 AM

True enough. Pots call kettles black all the time. Thank you! xomo

Eve Roper

Date: 10/15/2018 2:30:00 PM

Lovely write, Maureen, reading some of the comments there is also congratulations dew on POTd and now in the contest :) .. congratulations on your win...

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 10/16/2018 8:16:00 AM

Thank you Eve! :))) xomo

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/15/2018 1:28:00 PM

Maureen, you meet this lovely charming person - a writer! Then he breaks your heart! The description of how he stuffs your faults down your throat, still leaving you with a lump both from his awesome writing and awful abuse! Congratulations, Maureen, on your third place win!

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 10/16/2018 8:14:00 AM

"She" best friend who for a spell lived with me and hubby, dumped me when he and I split. Funny, eventually got over him, never got over her ;) Thank you for the muse prodding contest prompt Kim and my placement, xomo!

Roy Pett

Date: 10/10/2018 10:23:00 AM

Please accept my belated congratulations on your well deserved POTD Maureen with your excellent poem, good luck in contest my dear friend. :))

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 10/16/2018 8:15:00 AM

Belated thank you my friend! ;) xomo!

Robert Lindley

Date: 10/5/2018 6:49:00 AM

Congratulations my friend on this deeply felt poem about betrayal and the meanness of others. And look, it is You that became the great writer!

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 10/5/2018 7:21:00 AM

Thank you my friend, I had never considered that, of course, I could think of myself as good, it takes coming from a wonderful contemporary like yourself to be great. I am humbled and verklempt my dear friend. xomo <3

Haley Fisher

Date: 10/4/2018 5:51:00 PM

:( I don't know why some people are mean, but I am starting to realize that some try to bring other's down to try and ignore their own faults. I have enjoyed reading many of your poems.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 10/4/2018 9:17:00 PM

Thank you Haley! I think you're right with that one. She wasn't a mean person, but I'll never know if she ever realized how mean she was in that instance, her own faults were certainly set aside ;) xomo

Silent One

Date: 10/4/2018 4:52:00 PM

the one that got away... Congrats on POTD..

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 10/4/2018 9:18:00 PM

...quick like a bunny xomo (thank you my friend)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/4/2018 4:23:00 AM

- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Maureen :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 10/4/2018 7:29:00 AM

Thank you Anne-Lise :) xomo!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/3/2018 11:01:00 PM

Congrats, my friend, on POTD! :) gw

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 10/3/2018 11:03:00 PM

Thank you Wolfman! <3

Pat Adams

Date: 10/3/2018 7:18:00 AM

I really don't see how people can be like that. I felt you pain and hope that never happens again. Well done and congrats on POTD!!.......80)

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 10/3/2018 7:57:00 AM

Alas, I do; my mother was a pro ;) This one, well, it was a reaction to a break up, she had lived with us, she picked his side (with avengeance). It was a world of hurt (lol) Thank you my friend :) xomo

Brandy Nicole

Date: 10/2/2018 10:47:00 PM

Those that throw words have a lot to learn. Keep smiling and writing, and never look back at anyone that tried to bring you down. You are meant to Soar. Congratulations Maureen, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 10/3/2018 7:52:00 AM

Your words warm me Brandy :) thank you so much! xomo

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/2/2018 8:26:00 PM

This is so completely awesome, Maureen. Love this and a fav! Congratulations on your well deserved POTD honors for your compelling introspection.. Warmest wishes always my lovely.. ~Susan <3

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 10/2/2018 9:16:00 PM

Thank you so much Susan! A lovely surprise to be so honoured for this unpacking of emotional luggage, poetry as therapy; I'm humbled that it has resonated so. Helps the healing somehow. That closure you have only in yourself to find. Love and hugs dear <3 xomo

Daniel Turner

Date: 10/2/2018 12:25:00 PM

Congratulations Mo on POTD. Nicely penned!

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 10/2/2018 9:17:00 PM

Thank you my friend. Hugs! xomo :)

Charlie Smith

Date: 10/2/2018 11:44:00 AM

Some things, sadly, we just can't shake. Well done Maureen, congratulations on your honor...

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 10/2/2018 9:19:00 PM

You got that right Charlie. This has helped ;) Thank you dear poet, xomo

Warren Doll

Date: 10/2/2018 10:40:00 AM

First class free verse, Maureen. Congratulations on POTD, ~Warren

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 10/2/2018 9:20:00 PM

Straight from the heart. Thank you so much Warren :) xomo

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 10/2/2018 10:36:00 AM

Excellent piece Maureen, really enjoyed this very much, fully deserving the POTD. Have a great day, Gordon

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 10/2/2018 9:21:00 PM

Thank you so much Gordon, I'm thrilled to be so well received. xomo!

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/2/2018 10:27:00 AM

Congratulations for POTD Maureen :)

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 10/2/2018 9:22:00 PM

Thank you Heidi :) xomo!

Arturo Michael

Date: 10/2/2018 9:07:00 AM

What's that lump doing there...clear the way...Congratulations Maureen...Lovely day to you...

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 10/2/2018 10:12:00 AM

Arturo sweetness, thank you my friend! xomo

John Lawless

Date: 10/2/2018 8:28:00 AM

Mo, I sense a bit of introspective post concussion longing here. A tersely tight write that leaves a lump in my throat.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 10/2/2018 8:51:00 AM

Very astute of you John, I have only just realized that much of what she berated me for was indeed the brain injury, that and ADD, which incidentally lends one to be more likely to develop PCS. Don't think I'll ever completely recover from this one... till I lose my mind completely ;) Thank you John, xomo

Winged Warrior

Date: 10/2/2018 8:02:00 AM

Congrats!!! Mo, on your POTD!...I'm all choked up...love & lumps...^WW^

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 10/2/2018 8:18:00 AM

Me too! ;) Thank you my friend, xomo

Tim Smith

Date: 10/2/2018 7:30:00 AM

I hope they didn't make it and or now envious of how well you write.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 10/2/2018 7:50:00 AM

Tim, you're too cute (glad you're on my side ;) I hope she didn't destroy or pitch my paintings I gave her, as painful as it is I still have her painting on my wall. ...Though envy would be kinda cool ;) lol xomo!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/2/2018 6:44:00 AM

Back with congrats Maureen..a well deserved poem of the day..so much said in your usual potent style in just a few words.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 10/2/2018 7:47:00 AM

Thank so much Vijay. I cherish your kind support always. ...my brain is a sieve in more ways than one ;) xomo!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 10/2/2018 4:13:00 AM

Back with congratulations Maureen on POTD. Well deserved too. Tom

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 10/2/2018 7:44:00 AM

Thank you Tom <3 xomo

Jan Allison

Date: 10/2/2018 1:31:00 AM

gosh Mo what a crushing thing to happen and I can relate in a way in my own life - but you are the winner in so many ways and POTD is very well merited:-) hugs Jan xx

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 10/2/2018 7:44:00 AM

It was crushing. So close she had lived with my boyfriend and I, sent me that letter when he and I split, essentially breaking up with me. This the first I have written of it, POTD delivers a new, nicer lump in the throat ;) Thank you Jan xomo