Notes About The Poem

THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FREED VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' (intuitive cadence)& so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and respondents thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretation

Luminosity a Freed Verse

LUMINOSITY
natural & fresh
gently shaded
staring
visible
confronts
  &cradles
resilience
shattered
in
 emotional
 expression
gazes back
embellished
 eyes
  meeting
 resonate
attracting
a striking

facial expression
  screaming
harrowing
vulnerable
intriguing
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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