Luminescence

Dazzling wind-blown light
sprinkles a wavy surface
with meandering beacons,
offering to the passerby
seeds of sprite-like joy.
The sunlit sparkles shift
according to perspective,
aligning with the angle—
sun to lake to eyes:
Angels in the angles—
a trajectory of dreams.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Gauthier Avatar
May 22, 2021 at 6:53 AM
Lovely imagery and play on words, Carol ~
Deschler Avatar
June 16, 2018 at 3:46 PM
Well, I think this poem is simply gorgeous Carol! I am truly surprised that there have not been more comments posted on it ... Very nicely penned!
Mays Avatar
June 16, 2018 at 8:45 PM
Hi Kelly. Thank you! It's one of the poems I did a YouTube video for, if you have a chance to watch it.
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