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LUMINESCENCE

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we walk in silence
under light of the full moon
thoughts overflowing

12th grademoonhaiku

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Mickey Grubb

September 22, 2025 at 7:21 AM

A "happy place"...well stated, Sara.

Kahlani Steele

September 20, 2025 at 7:53 PM

This is beautiful, Sara. It feels serene and romantic. A perfect combination. Congratulations.

Andrea Dietrich

September 20, 2025 at 8:52 AM

Great haiku-ing. Congratulations

David Crandall

September 20, 2025 at 7:37 AM

Sounds romantic!

Dr. Vandana Sharma

September 20, 2025 at 7:05 AM

A walk of contemplation!! best wishes on your win.

Danny Derden

September 20, 2025 at 5:44 AM

Reflective. The poem glows with quiet intimacy, where moonlight and silence cradle the weight of unspoken thoughts.

Terry Miller

September 20, 2025 at 3:37 AM

I missed this beauty first time round, wonderful emotive haiku, congratulations

Line Gauthier

September 18, 2025 at 8:09 AM

Lovely ~ L3 you might want to consider 'overflowing' for more of the haiku feeling of being in the moment ~ seems gentler to me. But 'overflow' is good too. Just a thought ~

sara Etgen-Baker

September 18, 2025 at 2:23 PM

thanks for the tip.

Sotto Poet

September 18, 2025 at 8:09 AM

With its serene elegance and silvery visions evokes a soft, contemplative light that remains long after its brief phrases, dear Sara, exquisitely penned.

sara Etgen-Baker

September 19, 2025 at 5:16 PM

thank you, Sotto, for your thoughtful and kind comments. hugs from Texas, Sara

Rowena Velasco

September 18, 2025 at 7:22 AM

A beautifully minimalistic poem, Sara—its quiet simplicity and moonlit imagery create a gentle, reflective glow that lingers beyond its few words.

Joseph P. DiMino

September 18, 2025 at 4:22 AM

Full moon is magical. Though each phase has a partifular enchantment, like people. Well done. Moon does seem to affect our moods, as you say. Or, visa versa? Maybe both?

sara Etgen-Baker

September 18, 2025 at 5:54 AM

you've pondered an interesting question in your comments, Joe. The mystery and wondering of which affects whom...the intertwining is magical. thanks for visiting...enjoy your day, Sara

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