LUMINESCENCE

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we walk in silence
under light of the full moon
thoughts overflowing

12th grademoonhaiku

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Sotto Poet

Date: 9/18/2025 8:09:00 AM

With its serene elegance and silvery visions evokes a soft, contemplative light that remains long after its brief phrases, dear Sara, exquisitely penned.

Line Gauthier

Date: 9/18/2025 8:09:00 AM

Lovely ~ L3 you might want to consider 'overflowing' for more of the haiku feeling of being in the moment ~ seems gentler to me. But 'overflow' is good too. Just a thought ~

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/18/2025 2:23:00 PM

thanks for the tip.

Rowena Velasco

Date: 9/18/2025 7:22:00 AM

A beautifully minimalistic poem, Sara—its quiet simplicity and moonlit imagery create a gentle, reflective glow that lingers beyond its few words.

Joe Dimino

Date: 9/18/2025 4:22:00 AM

Full moon is magical. Though each phase has a partifular enchantment, like people. Well done. Moon does seem to affect our moods, as you say. Or, visa versa? Maybe both?

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/18/2025 5:54:00 AM

you've pondered an interesting question in your comments, Joe. The mystery and wondering of which affects whom...the intertwining is magical. thanks for visiting...enjoy your day, Sara

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