Luminesce

Velvet moonlight heart,
haunting dream on diamond kites,
galaxies aglow
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Dietrich Avatar
October 2, 2025 at 8:50 PM
Ahhh, so pretty!
Kendrick Avatar
August 3, 2025 at 9:55 AM
I could see that night sky from this description. Way to go. I am glad I chose to read this one today. Sara K
Kerr Avatar
August 3, 2025 at 10:10 AM
I’m delighted you enjoyed it,Sara. Thanks for your compliment and for taking time to read it Howard
King Avatar
April 15, 2020 at 11:21 PM
ahhhh.....that second line in this haiku brings it all home......straight to the sky.....i dig this right here.....Keep Writing!
Kerr Avatar
April 16, 2020 at 1:53 AM
Your kind critique means everything to me. I most certainly will keep writing in an area where perseverance is key. I’m glad you enjoyed it, Marty. Howard
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