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Lumiere

Stars ... Heaven's candles Flickering for the fortunate Those with the eyes to see, and hearts to kindle Long have you stood, silent sentinel Distant, trembling witnesses To all of man's foibles and fruitions Wonder of wonders ... What eyes will sparkle with your mysteries - What souls will you tug with yearning When no earthly hearts remain to thrum And Sol has turned red ... And cold? ~ 8th Place ~ in the "Contest Number 500 Any Form Or None" Poetry Contest, Brian Strand, Judge & Sponsor.
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October 4, 2018 at 4:58 PM
The mysteries of the universe glimmer in starlight. Brilliantly expressed in your lovely poem Greg! I can't believe more have not seen this beauty. But there are so many glorious poems I am sure I have missed because of time constraints. Congratulations on your win! : )
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October 30, 2018 at 2:47 AM
Yes, indeed, Connie - I have had NO time to read and comment lately, and it is one of my favorite things. Many thanks to you, friend, I'm pleased you liked this one! :-) <3
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September 29, 2018 at 3:42 PM
I loved this poem , Greg,which somehow brought an emotional closeness to the distant stars. Thank you!
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October 30, 2018 at 2:46 AM
It is my pleasure, Wendy ... and thank you SO much, my friend - you are sweet! :-) <3
Gauthier Avatar
September 29, 2018 at 10:08 AM
Congrats on your win, Gregory. Well penned.
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October 30, 2018 at 2:45 AM
Many thanks to you, Dear Line! :-) <3
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September 26, 2018 at 10:19 AM
So beautiful Greg and indeed full of wonder. I really enjoyed reading it this morning!!!
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October 30, 2018 at 2:45 AM
Thank you so much, Mike - blessings, my friend! :-)
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