Lull-Lull-Lullabies

Lithesome fingers trailed along the ukulele’s frets as Lilah played her dulcet lullabies. Swaddled in a blanket, smiling, lay her little lad, looking up at her with large blue eyes. Lilah lilted, “Sleep, my son, for tranquil dreams await. Lull-lull-lullabies for you I sing.” As she crooned mellifluously lulling him to bliss, she watched small eyelids flutter-fluttering. Lightly, lightly, letting fingers roll along the strings, Lilah moved her delicate small hand. Eyes that lingered lovingly on the wee one saw him amble soundly into Slumber Land. May 29, 2017 for Cecelia Hopkins-Drewer's Contemporary Poetry Contest *I enjoy almost all types of poetry, but I suppose this represents more the Classical approach which I most often use (more lyrical and with some rhymes) though my focus is on alliteration here. I love the way L words sound!
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Borke Avatar
October 21, 2017 at 9:13 PM
My eyelids are dropping... just kidding, but this is special.
Devnath  Avatar
June 6, 2017 at 10:31 AM
An excellent picture you have drawn with the colours of lullabies. Enjoyed a lot. Genus you are as always... Loved always my dear lovely friend, bl
Daniel Avatar
June 6, 2017 at 9:03 AM
I like the way your lullaby sounds, Andrea:) lulls me in a nice rhythmic manner:)
Rodrigues Avatar
June 5, 2017 at 9:06 PM
I love love love the lull-lull-abies! Very sweet!
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 4, 2017 at 6:54 AM
This is beautifully written Andrea. I can picture the entire scene through your wonderful imagery! 7 ; )
Duncan Avatar
June 2, 2017 at 7:42 PM
I like this very much, Nope I haven't posted any new ones :( :) :) I will tho
Duet Avatar
May 31, 2017 at 7:07 PM
Just wonderful, Andrea, and I love all the "L" words you used. I'm going to sleep now...lol
Parmale Avatar
May 30, 2017 at 10:48 PM
I initially found this very hard to understand as there are many new words for me...But after knowing the meanings I must say this is an amazing write....Beautiful....
Raven Avatar
May 30, 2017 at 12:36 PM
Hi Andrea, a wonderful, lyrical piece that flows so easily down the page. Such a gently beautiful piece. An excellent poem Andrea. Good luck in the contest. This one has the highest rating and has to be a fave. Such gentle, beautiful content Andrea. Hugs....Mike. XX
Kannan Avatar
May 30, 2017 at 5:26 AM
So beautifully written Andrea... Loved it... Thanks for sharing this lovely write...Reads like a winner... A big 7...
Pett Avatar
May 30, 2017 at 4:29 AM
Brilliant poem Andrea, great alliteration, enjoyed from start to finish, :))
Walker Avatar
May 29, 2017 at 9:33 PM
Well written alliteration, love your lyrical l's.
Wolf Avatar
May 29, 2017 at 8:43 PM
I love this! It is simply adorable! Best of luck to you
Smith Avatar
May 29, 2017 at 6:49 PM
I love all the alliteration Andrea...it is one of my favorite devices.
Cozart Avatar
May 29, 2017 at 4:41 PM
I can actually see the babies eyes slowly closing.
Y. Avatar
May 29, 2017 at 4:27 PM
Hi Andrea, This is just beautiful. I enjoy reading you because you are sooo talented. The picture that you painted with words of mother and son was just breathtaking. I could almost hear her playing the ukulele and singing a sweet lullaby. It looks like a winner to me. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis PS, I love the "L" sound too. Folk usually take the "A" off my name and pronounce the latter.
Allison Avatar
May 29, 2017 at 4:20 PM
an absolute joy to read I love the alliteration and soothing flow of the poem - wish it would lull me to sleep!!:-) hugs Jan xx
Sands Avatar
May 29, 2017 at 4:04 PM
This is so nice, so peaceful Andrea ! Well written. :)
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