Get Your Premium Membership

Lullabye For Lilah

Lithsome little lass of mine – always laughing - lingering outside, you luxuriate in sun’s last light. I see you leap gleefully in the field lush with lilies. My silly daffodil, you long to pluck the last rays of twilight! Can I lure my darling lamb inside with luscious lemon pie? Let me bathe you, Lilah. Later, the night shall surely creep. Lay your sleepy head, Love, on the pillow; listen as I sing a lilting melody to lull my lovely little girl to sleep. Dec. 12, 2020 N/A in Alliteration contest for Brian Strand's Podium Placing Promise(3) Poetry Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 12/16/2020 10:09:00 AM
Beautiful Alliteration... a lullaby so sweet... Hugs ~ Ani
Login to Reply
Date: 12/14/2020 12:19:00 PM
Lovely lullabies for the Lithesome little lass, best wishes in the contest Andrea
Login to Reply
Date: 12/13/2020 4:36:00 PM
This would have been gorgeous without the alliterativeness, but it is brilliant with it.
Login to Reply
Date: 12/13/2020 3:48:00 PM
I love this lovely, soothing lullaby, Andrea!!
Login to Reply
Date: 12/12/2020 6:03:00 PM
Congrats my friend on another win.
Login to Reply
Dietrich Avatar
Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/13/2020 11:43:00 AM
The contest has not been judged yet , Rob. I don't know why I got another congrats below yours.
Date: 12/12/2020 4:16:00 PM
So sweet and cute! Congratulations, Andrea!
Login to Reply
Date: 12/12/2020 11:43:00 AM
Lovely, lilting, lullaby for your little "lamb" Andrea. I this I see it on the list of winners. Well done! Best wishes for the contest.
Login to Reply
Date: 12/12/2020 9:15:00 AM
Great lullaby that pleases the senses. Best of luck. ~~
Login to Reply
Date: 12/12/2020 6:22:00 AM
I love these lovely little lines. I predict a winner. ;0)
Login to Reply
Date: 12/12/2020 4:17:00 AM
Nothing beats a soothing lullaby Andrea. Well written alliteration. Enjoy your weekend Tom
Login to Reply
Date: 12/12/2020 4:16:00 AM
This is B R I L L I A N T!!! I love it... You did such a glorious, joyous, brilliant write with L... LOVE IT... God bless you, sweet Andrea
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things