Sotto Poet Poet Rhyme

Lullaby to the Stars

September 24, 2025, 

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The moon took her place with a silvery sigh,
while shadows danced softly across the sky.
She hummed to the stars in a lullaby tune
and cradled the dreams of the slumbering dune.
But dawn will arrive with a golden sweep—
The sun awakens what the night put to sleep.

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Krishnanand Guptar October 7, 2025 at 9:04 AM Heartiest congratulations , poet friend, on your top win in this contest with a lovely poem with beautiful imagery on the transition from night to dawn with a sweet lullaby.

Andrea Dietrich October 4, 2025 at 10:49 AM Big congrats . Lovely images

Anisha Dutta October 4, 2025 at 6:59 AM I am charmed from the start and to reach the last line . Big Congrats to win TOP

Valsa George September 27, 2025 at 5:37 AM "But dawn will arrive with a golden sweep— the sun will awaken what night put to sleep."... . Lovely poetic lines on the transition of night into dawn. Great rhyming too. All the best dear Lasaad.

Aurore Severo September 25, 2025 at 11:07 PM Very beautiful!

sara Etgen-Baker September 24, 2025 at 5:24 PM beautifully flowing rhyme poem. Your imagery is subtly striking. I especially liked: dawn will arrive with a golden sweep— the sun will awaken what night put to sleep. best wishes with this entry in the contest, hugs from Texas, Sara

Beryl Edmonds September 24, 2025 at 4:04 PM This is a lovely lullaby Sotto… Beryl

Paige Hind September 24, 2025 at 3:32 PM Love this - beautiful, especially the last line

Chetta Achara September 24, 2025 at 11:29 AM Oh, my, such a beautiful verse!