Lullaby To An Evening Sky

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                      Swept from mother earth

                    the sun snuggles into clouds

                        Water-colored dreams
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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K. Avatar
April 28, 2010 at 10:36 PM
Congrats for this winning piece, Carrie :) I loved your second line--it's so cozy--Sorry haven't been here for a while and have some catching up to do-enjoy your week!
Murphy Avatar
April 26, 2010 at 11:51 AM
congrats on your placement in this contest well done faleshia
White Avatar
April 25, 2010 at 8:42 PM
Simply amazing Carrie- Congrats to you
Moreno Avatar
April 25, 2010 at 4:26 PM
Carrie, congratulations on your success in my contest...Raul
Kendrick Avatar
April 25, 2010 at 11:04 AM
Great write that should do well in the contest..Good luck...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
Knop Avatar
April 25, 2010 at 10:32 AM
Hi, Carrie! Thank you for your birthday greetings. I was alone on my birthday as all my relatives are living too far away from me, but I received a number of telephone calls and mails. It was ok and I prepared myself a nice dinner. Love, Gert
Knop Avatar
April 25, 2010 at 10:24 AM
So pretty penned, Carrie! And thank you for your comments. I hope you had also a nice weekend...Love, Gert
Johnson Avatar
April 25, 2010 at 8:52 AM
Such a pretty picture. Thanks for the kind comments. Love, Joyce
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April 24, 2010 at 7:55 PM
nice read you have here,..p.d
Mehta Avatar
April 24, 2010 at 7:54 PM
A nice apt expressions. Good luck
Murphy Avatar
April 24, 2010 at 6:40 PM
very nice enjoyed if for contest good luck very well done have a nice weekend faleshia
Dietrich Avatar
April 24, 2010 at 6:27 PM
ahhhhhhh right back at ya with this cuddly little haiku! Luv, andrea ps by the way, I sent your book on Thursday!
Mckenzie Avatar
April 24, 2010 at 6:23 PM
Carrie~ A wonderful interpretation! Lovely read! Love Laura :)
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