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Lullaby Series Iv

Lullaby IV I wish, one time, to ride across the years to you upon the back of the coal black mare whose hooves are indigo hue once there I’ll hang about your neck hold you fast to me; make you swear on our true love you’ll ne’er return to the sea.

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John Fleming

Date: 11/4/2017 6:39:00 AM

I really do like these "Lullaby" poems you pen, Patricia...this one, however -- is really special! Deserves far more applause than it has so far received...it really is so very good. As a poem it does exactly what you want it to do: effortlessly sliding of the tongue in highly descriptive imagery - brilliant! :) john

Patricia Cresswell
Date: 11/4/2017 12:20:00 PM

Thank you John, I enjoy writing them.

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 10/31/2017 1:44:00 PM

An instant classic in my book, fave my sister of the pen xomo!

Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/31/2017 2:32:00 PM

There may be more (wicked witchy cackle). Thanks for following this far my dearest poetess.