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Lullaby Series Ii

Lullaby 2

wind voices speak wild words
above an eider down of dreams
and nighted owl sleeps close to the trunk
when November rends our sky

rain changes from her silks
and whitened raiment wears
as winter casts its nets of frost
across the naked bowers

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 10/31/2017 11:14:00 AM
I agree w/the other poets/poetesses ... vivid imagery, Patricia. Impeccable poetry. Love and smiles forever.
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/31/2017 11:27:00 AM
Thank you Freddie.
Date: 10/30/2017 3:30:00 AM
I really do like these lullabies you are writing, Patricia. Keep them coming - for they are really lovely little pieces of verse! :) john
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/30/2017 9:48:00 AM
Thank you John. I love writing them because somehow they free my imagination more so than its usual bent.
Date: 10/29/2017 8:44:00 AM
A treat of images in your wonderful poem, Patricia:)
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Date: 10/29/2017 7:56:00 AM
Great imagery Patricia..
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Date: 10/29/2017 6:28:00 AM
Calming and full of imagery --well written, as always!
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