Lullaby

mom 
holding
baby close
giving him warmth
sings a soft sweet lullaby soothing him
baby stretches tiny mouth opens yawning
pulling at ears
rubbing eyes
slowly 
sleeps
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Kendrick Avatar
January 3, 2021 at 4:03 AM
Ahhh!! I can see the picture. They are a joy when they are so young. Thanks for your visit to my page. Sara
Jayasankar Avatar
January 5, 2021 at 1:47 AM
Thank you so much Sara for the lovely comment.. Yes true... Have a blessed day..hugs :)
Bangalee Avatar
December 10, 2020 at 1:35 AM
beautiful Tetractys on the tender of mother and child
Jayasankar Avatar
December 10, 2020 at 1:54 AM
Thank you so much Mahtab for the visit and comment. God bless. Have a great day :)
Ashley Avatar
December 7, 2020 at 5:31 PM
Dear Ani, such a lovely tender moment captured in your breathtaking imagery. I especially love the alliteration and the soothing "s" sounds of this line; "sings a soft sweet lullaby soothing him" - splendid! Your golden pen always shines, my inspiring friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Jayasankar Avatar
December 9, 2020 at 5:40 AM
Susan thank you so much dear friend for the visit and your sweet comment. You are more inspiring... Wishing you a lovely blessed day. Love n hugs ~ :)
James Avatar
December 6, 2020 at 11:12 AM
So sweet Ani, good imagery too, love holding and cradling babies, such a beautiful feeling, thank you dear friend, Emilia : )
Jayasankar Avatar
December 7, 2020 at 2:40 AM
Thank you so much dear Emilia. Yes dear... it is such a great feeling for all mothers.. Have a blessed day dear friend.. Hugs.. :)
Buhagiar Avatar
December 6, 2020 at 5:59 AM
I thought you were going to become friends and read my happy poems. But now I'll post even dark ones like the one I wrote for Silent One. ~~
Jayasankar Avatar
December 6, 2020 at 6:39 AM
Actually I didn't get you Victor. But thank you so much for the visit and your valuable comment. I will surely read both your HAPPY and DARK poems and comment. Have a great blessed day. God bless.
Wolf Avatar
December 5, 2020 at 5:29 PM
Ultr-adorable, Ani. No more babies in my life now. Kind of sad. Thanks for the memories. ~ gw
Jayasankar Avatar
December 6, 2020 at 5:41 AM
Thank you for the visit and your valuable comment Gershon....Here too no babies.. my son is growing up... but I had him in mind while writing this.. such sweet memories are GREAT isn't it? Have a great day. Best regards. :)
Dietrich Avatar
December 3, 2020 at 1:40 PM
this is just adorable!
Jayasankar Avatar
December 4, 2020 at 9:35 AM
Thank you so much Andrea for your visit and valuable comment. Hugs.. :)
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