Lullaby

floating in darkness tears move bells in lullaby... soothing dreams light up July 24, 2020 Haiku or Senryu Poetry Contest Sponsor: Constance La France ~Winner: 2nd Place

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Line Gauthier

Date: 8/2/2020 4:53:00 AM

Lovely ~

Constance La France

Date: 7/29/2020 4:58:00 PM

Aditi, congratulations on your win in my senryu contest with this wonderful write _Constance

Jenish Somadas

Date: 7/26/2020 10:39:00 PM

tears move bells in lullaby... Even the tiny lines are blessed with a poetic hand.. Congrats Aditi..

Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/29/2020 4:54:00 AM

Glad you love my muse dear friend. Thank you for your kind appreciation :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/26/2020 7:39:00 PM

Congratulations on the win, Aditi. and for the info on your warrior name. That's so cool.

Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/29/2020 4:53:00 AM

Thank you for your kind appreciation Andrea! That bit was a delightful surprise for me so I really couldn't stop myself from sharing how we have that trait in common :) Much love!

Eve Roper

Date: 7/26/2020 4:12:00 PM

Back with congratulations on your win with these beautiful verse. Hugs Eve

Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/29/2020 4:52:00 AM

Thank you for another visit to congratulate me with your kind wishes Eve :)

Jan Allison

Date: 7/26/2020 4:05:00 PM

such a moving piece, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/29/2020 4:52:00 AM

Glad you love it Jan. Thank you for your kind appreciation :) Much love!

Edward Ibeh

Date: 7/26/2020 2:25:00 PM

Back with congratulations, Aditi!:-)

Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/29/2020 4:52:00 AM

Thank you for another visit and your kind wishes Edward :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/26/2020 11:09:00 AM

- Congratulations on your lovely senyru, Aditi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/29/2020 4:51:00 AM

Thank you for your visit and kind appreciation Anne. Much love :)

Paul Callus

Date: 7/26/2020 11:08:00 AM

Congratulations on your podium finish, Aditi...very much deserved! Best regards // paul

Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/29/2020 4:50:00 AM

Thank you for your visit and kind appreciation Paul :)

Eve Roper

Date: 7/25/2020 12:46:00 AM

I I like the feeling you put into the Senryu, Good luck in the contest.

Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/29/2020 4:50:00 AM

I am glad you loved my muse Eve. Thank you for your kind wishes :)

Edward Ibeh

Date: 7/24/2020 1:14:00 PM

Excellent senryu, Aditi:-) A winner in my book!

Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/29/2020 4:50:00 AM

Glad you loved it Edward! Thank you :)

V. Deepa

Date: 7/24/2020 3:53:00 AM

Hi Aditi mam, Tears move bells in Lullaby..lovely imagery. Enjoyed your Senryu. My best wishes for you in the contest.:-) I believe your fine and doing well. Take care.Much love to you.:-)

Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/29/2020 4:50:00 AM

Thank you for your visits and constant encouragement to inspire me Deepa. Much love :)

V. Deepa
Date: 7/27/2020 1:24:00 AM

Back to you with my heartily Congratulations Aditi mam:-)