Lullaby


  floating in darkness
        tears move bells in lullaby...
              soothing dreams light up



July 24, 2020

Haiku or Senryu Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Constance La France
~Winner: 2nd Place
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Gauthier Avatar
August 2, 2020 at 4:53 AM
Lovely ~
La France Avatar
July 29, 2020 at 4:58 PM
Aditi, congratulations on your win in my senryu contest with this wonderful write _Constance
Somadas Avatar
July 26, 2020 at 10:39 PM
tears move bells in lullaby... Even the tiny lines are blessed with a poetic hand.. Congrats Aditi..
Mishra Avatar
July 29, 2020 at 4:54 AM
Glad you love my muse dear friend. Thank you for your kind appreciation :)
Dietrich Avatar
July 26, 2020 at 7:39 PM
Congratulations on the win, Aditi. and for the info on your warrior name. That's so cool.
Mishra Avatar
July 29, 2020 at 4:53 AM
Thank you for your kind appreciation Andrea! That bit was a delightful surprise for me so I really couldn't stop myself from sharing how we have that trait in common :) Much love!
Roper Avatar
July 26, 2020 at 4:12 PM
Back with congratulations on your win with these beautiful verse. Hugs Eve
Mishra Avatar
July 29, 2020 at 4:52 AM
Thank you for another visit to congratulate me with your kind wishes Eve :)
Allison Avatar
July 26, 2020 at 4:05 PM
such a moving piece, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Mishra Avatar
July 29, 2020 at 4:52 AM
Glad you love it Jan. Thank you for your kind appreciation :) Much love!
Ibeh Avatar
July 26, 2020 at 2:25 PM
Back with congratulations, Aditi!:-)
Mishra Avatar
July 29, 2020 at 4:52 AM
Thank you for another visit and your kind wishes Edward :)
Andresen Avatar
July 26, 2020 at 11:09 AM
- Congratulations on your lovely senyru, Aditi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Mishra Avatar
July 29, 2020 at 4:51 AM
Thank you for your visit and kind appreciation Anne. Much love :)
Callus Avatar
July 26, 2020 at 11:08 AM
Congratulations on your podium finish, Aditi...very much deserved! Best regards // paul
Mishra Avatar
July 29, 2020 at 4:50 AM
Thank you for your visit and kind appreciation Paul :)
Roper Avatar
July 25, 2020 at 12:46 AM
I I like the feeling you put into the Senryu, Good luck in the contest.
Mishra Avatar
July 29, 2020 at 4:50 AM
I am glad you loved my muse Eve. Thank you for your kind wishes :)
Ibeh Avatar
July 24, 2020 at 1:14 PM
Excellent senryu, Aditi:-) A winner in my book!
Mishra Avatar
July 29, 2020 at 4:50 AM
Glad you loved it Edward! Thank you :)
Deepa Avatar
July 24, 2020 at 3:53 AM
Hi Aditi mam, Tears move bells in Lullaby..lovely imagery. Enjoyed your Senryu. My best wishes for you in the contest.:-) I believe your fine and doing well. Take care.Much love to you.:-)
Mishra Avatar
July 29, 2020 at 4:50 AM
Thank you for your visits and constant encouragement to inspire me Deepa. Much love :)
Deepa Avatar
July 27, 2020 at 1:24 AM
Back to you with my heartily Congratulations Aditi mam:-)
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