Lullaby


  floating in darkness
        tears move bells in lullaby...
              soothing dreams light up



July 24, 2020

Haiku or Senryu Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Constance La France
~Winner: 2nd Place

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Date: 8/2/2020 4:53:00 AM
Lovely ~
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Date: 7/29/2020 4:58:00 PM
Aditi, congratulations on your win in my senryu contest with this wonderful write _Constance
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Date: 7/26/2020 10:39:00 PM
tears move bells in lullaby... Even the tiny lines are blessed with a poetic hand.. Congrats Aditi..
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/29/2020 4:54:00 AM
Glad you love my muse dear friend. Thank you for your kind appreciation :)
Date: 7/26/2020 7:39:00 PM
Congratulations on the win, Aditi. and for the info on your warrior name. That's so cool.
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/29/2020 4:53:00 AM
Thank you for your kind appreciation Andrea! That bit was a delightful surprise for me so I really couldn't stop myself from sharing how we have that trait in common :) Much love!
Date: 7/26/2020 4:12:00 PM
Back with congratulations on your win with these beautiful verse. Hugs Eve
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/29/2020 4:52:00 AM
Thank you for another visit to congratulate me with your kind wishes Eve :)
Date: 7/26/2020 4:05:00 PM
such a moving piece, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/29/2020 4:52:00 AM
Glad you love it Jan. Thank you for your kind appreciation :) Much love!
Date: 7/26/2020 2:25:00 PM
Back with congratulations, Aditi!:-)
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/29/2020 4:52:00 AM
Thank you for another visit and your kind wishes Edward :)
Date: 7/26/2020 11:09:00 AM
- Congratulations on your lovely senyru, Aditi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/29/2020 4:51:00 AM
Thank you for your visit and kind appreciation Anne. Much love :)
Date: 7/26/2020 11:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your podium finish, Aditi...very much deserved! Best regards // paul
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/29/2020 4:50:00 AM
Thank you for your visit and kind appreciation Paul :)
Date: 7/25/2020 12:46:00 AM
I I like the feeling you put into the Senryu, Good luck in the contest.
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/29/2020 4:50:00 AM
I am glad you loved my muse Eve. Thank you for your kind wishes :)
Date: 7/24/2020 1:14:00 PM
Excellent senryu, Aditi:-) A winner in my book!
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/29/2020 4:50:00 AM
Glad you loved it Edward! Thank you :)
Date: 7/24/2020 3:53:00 AM
Hi Aditi mam, Tears move bells in Lullaby..lovely imagery. Enjoyed your Senryu. My best wishes for you in the contest.:-) I believe your fine and doing well. Take care.Much love to you.:-)
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/29/2020 4:50:00 AM
Thank you for your visits and constant encouragement to inspire me Deepa. Much love :)
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V. Deepa
Date: 7/27/2020 1:24:00 AM
Back to you with my heartily Congratulations Aditi mam:-)
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