Lukewarm Love

To keep warm not hot
I’m pushed on the back burner
Lukewarm love turns cold

Eileen Manassian Ghali
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Nance Avatar
October 13, 2015 at 1:05 PM
That is so true, gotta keep the fire burning. hugs
Davis Avatar
April 22, 2014 at 8:04 AM
Eileen Such a wonderfully written poem of a love that fizzled out. You need to find someone to make that flame high again. thank you for the great comment on my No Exit poem.
Manassian Avatar
April 22, 2014 at 8:12 AM
It was my pleasure to read your work, Robin. There is a sincerity in your writes which I appreciate.
Dietrich Avatar
January 29, 2014 at 10:20 PM
this is GREAT!!!!
Tacito Avatar
January 27, 2014 at 9:33 PM
Love should never be lukewarm. It requires the sun for its heat...not a microwave. Damn fine job!
Manassian Avatar
January 28, 2014 at 7:38 AM
YOU ARE RIGHT!!!!! Hmmmmmmm....Oh dear...I was thinking of an old fashioned stove....Yes, I have read a series by Janette Oak about the Canadian and American frontier women having to push the pots onto the back burner to keep the food warm....I was alluding to that. ;) Sun would work.....Thanks for stopping by, Drake. :)
Lamoureux Avatar
January 27, 2014 at 7:27 PM
I like the new crown photo.
Manassian Avatar
January 28, 2014 at 7:36 AM
Thanks...hard to do a selfie...I posted about four of them on FB....I got comments on this one. Said it made me look girlie....Oh well....I guess that's a good thing. :)
Lamoureux Avatar
January 27, 2014 at 7:26 PM
Just turn on that back burner, you will be hot in no time.
Lamoureux Avatar
January 28, 2014 at 8:08 AM
Ha ha, I didn't think of it that way.
Manassian Avatar
January 28, 2014 at 7:35 AM
Hmmmmmmm....As the poem goes....the writer has been pushed to the back burner....Someone else should do the turning on....don't you think? ;) I am constantly in that state, anyway...so, perhaps a little cooling off will be good. ;) You already have me smiling. Thank you, Richard.
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