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Ludicrous

Foolish little girl Makes a naughty mistake Treats those hard nosed With a blizzard Take a peek That shameless smirk Turns upside down Twigging what she’s lost it No one identifies Ludicrous The miner On a pile of black gold? Don’t outshine The dim light in the dark pool There not worth To polish that shoe Now shake off: That gold digger act Can’t last so long Don’t wait for life to react

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/8/2009 11:25:00 AM
Great Realism. Love The Ending. On a pile of black gold; Now shake off: That gold digger act...awesom.
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Date: 6/6/2009 5:56:00 AM
Great poem, your way with words is fascinating!
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Date: 6/6/2009 5:40:00 AM
Saidah..thank you again for your comments. But again, your poem astounds. You weave words like no one I have ever read. Like "the miner on a pile of black gold." WHO but you would think to weave words like this? Keep writing...you are special. Patricia
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Date: 6/6/2009 4:48:00 AM
This is a great piece. I love the flow of words in this piece. Keep sharing your mind with us. You are great! Adeleke
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