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Ludicrous

Foolish little girl
Makes a naughty mistake
Treats those hard nosed
With a blizzard

Take a peek
That shameless smirk
Turns upside down
Twigging what she’s lost it

No one identifies
Ludicrous
 The miner
On a pile of black gold?

Don’t outshine
The dim light in the dark pool
There not worth
To polish that shoe

Now shake off: 
That gold digger act
Can’t last so long
Don’t wait for life to react

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/8/2009 11:25:00 AM
Great Realism. Love The Ending. On a pile of black gold; Now shake off: That gold digger act...awesom.
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Date: 6/6/2009 5:56:00 AM
Great poem, your way with words is fascinating!
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Date: 6/6/2009 5:40:00 AM
Saidah..thank you again for your comments. But again, your poem astounds. You weave words like no one I have ever read. Like "the miner on a pile of black gold." WHO but you would think to weave words like this? Keep writing...you are special. Patricia
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Date: 6/6/2009 4:48:00 AM
This is a great piece. I love the flow of words in this piece. Keep sharing your mind with us. You are great! Adeleke
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