Lucy

~Lucia~
She is looking at me wide lovely eyes
Am asking for a favor as i recall 
Our sweet sour innocent relationship
That has endured the last few years
I still recall that fateful night we met

She was going home after a days work
Twas late in the night and by chance
We met as i was keeping vigil
I escorted her home there started
Our sweet sour relationship

I told her a lie on our fist meeting
She was elated to help me on the second
She became too attached subsequently
Lovely Lucia didn't like to be dependent
She started pulling away me allowing it

She is looking at me with those lovely eyes
I do still feel them emotions after so long
Am gonna miss her in the next few months
For i so love our bitter sour relationship
Which has survived the test of time 






(a dedication to Lucia)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Kimathi Avatar
October 15, 2015 at 7:42 AM
A beautifully, flowing piece, like soft ripples on a pond in summer..... Really enjoyed the piece! ;-)
Nyaga Avatar
October 16, 2015 at 1:18 AM
Thanks Teddy for enjoying this piece..Blessings
Dunn Avatar
October 5, 2015 at 9:19 PM
Dear Lewis Wow what a romantic write here, my passionate fellow, I'm impressed great job of heart felt inspirational work, the other romantic poets better watch out, cheri and thanks for the comment enjoyed it alot, cheri
Nyaga Avatar
October 6, 2015 at 2:38 AM
Thanks alot for the nice compliments and the esteemed visit to my page//hugs and blessings
A  Avatar
October 4, 2015 at 12:06 AM
What an alluring poem. I especially like the title. Lewis, it's worth the taste... Skat
Nyaga Avatar
October 5, 2015 at 2:39 AM
Skat am grateful for those nice compliments.. thanks once more// hugs and blessings
Hunjeri Avatar
October 3, 2015 at 4:00 PM
this is so tender and sweet. lovely!! and I enjoyed:-)
Nyaga Avatar
October 5, 2015 at 2:38 AM
Thanks Njeri for your lovely comments... they are appreciated//hugs & blessings
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