Lucky Streak

You never asked to come inside
too many rules,  which to abide?
and then something snapped.... BOING!!!
I wanted you to come inside
was cool that neither of us tried
too hard, 'cause that's just boring.

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Contest: RIMEE COUEE
My Name: Nancy Jones
Quote which inspired my piece: "Do not feel lonely. The entire universe is inside you."
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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