Lucky Eight

Lucky Eight

But I adore you, don’t go! I plead without hesitation,

Your pulchtritude is way beyond just simply amazing.

This I say and my discomfort is blazing,

As if that for her is a spectacular revelation.

I was Five minutes late for our dinner at Eight,

So this paragon of perniciousness lost her mind,

She snapped and stabbed me in the eye from behind.

Buts she’s so full of charisma that I still think she’s great.

12/07/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gentry Avatar
July 31, 2018 at 9:28 PM
Lol. Creative. Congratulations on your win.
Kantor Avatar
August 3, 2018 at 12:29 AM
Tx Susan :)
Man Avatar
July 12, 2018 at 7:58 PM
Hi JEFF, I enjoyed your Lucky Eight!
Kantor Avatar
August 3, 2018 at 12:29 AM
Cheers mate
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