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'PUPPY' LOVE In the dark garage, staring up at me, Eight pairs of blazing black eyes, Their revelation - a real surprise, Pure pulchritude, I could see; All discomfort forgotten, there she lay, Like a paragon of grandeur, Her cheerful charisma was, for sure - A motherly sight to adore, I say. 07/28/18

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Date: 8/4/2018 6:40:00 PM
OH this is just DARLING. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 7/31/2018 9:16:00 PM
Congratulations on your #1 win. Very creative. Well done!
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Date: 7/29/2018 2:22:00 PM
jo, nice to see you again...what a charming write which makes my day!..huggs
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Date: 7/28/2018 9:56:00 PM
This is so sweet Jo!!!
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Date: 7/28/2018 6:51:00 PM
The sweet love and devotion always returned by puppies and their mother. This is so endearing Jo. A great entry for the contest. It is very nice to see you posting again my friend. Hugs, Connie xxoo
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Date: 7/28/2018 11:18:00 AM
Who doesn't love puppies. :) Really nice my friend.
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Date: 7/28/2018 10:52:00 AM
Yes, puppies! A very clever and sweet write, Jo. Nice to see you posting. Hoping you are well:)
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Date: 7/28/2018 9:18:00 AM
Brand new eyes staring at you...Nicely done Jo
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Date: 7/28/2018 9:10:00 AM
aww so sweet Jo I could picture this so clearly:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/28/2018 8:20:00 AM
Well done! You nailed it. Good luck in the contest.
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