Lucky 8

'PUPPY' LOVE

In the dark garage, staring up at me, 
Eight pairs of blazing black eyes, 
Their revelation - a real surprise, 
Pure pulchritude, I could see; 
All discomfort forgotten, there she lay,
Like a paragon of grandeur,
Her cheerful charisma was, for sure -
A motherly sight to adore, I say.


07/28/18
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Dietrich Avatar
August 4, 2018 at 6:40 PM
OH this is just DARLING. Congrats on your win!
Gentry Avatar
July 31, 2018 at 9:16 PM
Congratulations on your #1 win. Very creative. Well done!
Onclaud Avatar
July 29, 2018 at 2:22 PM
jo, nice to see you again...what a charming write which makes my day!..huggs
Vaso Avatar
July 28, 2018 at 9:56 PM
This is so sweet Jo!!!
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 28, 2018 at 6:51 PM
The sweet love and devotion always returned by puppies and their mother. This is so endearing Jo. A great entry for the contest. It is very nice to see you posting again my friend. Hugs, Connie xxoo
Green Avatar
July 28, 2018 at 11:18 AM
Who doesn't love puppies. :) Really nice my friend.
Turner Avatar
July 28, 2018 at 10:52 AM
Yes, puppies! A very clever and sweet write, Jo. Nice to see you posting. Hoping you are well:)
May Avatar
July 28, 2018 at 9:18 AM
Brand new eyes staring at you...Nicely done Jo
Allison Avatar
July 28, 2018 at 9:10 AM
aww so sweet Jo I could picture this so clearly:-) hugs jan xx
Lamoureux Avatar
July 28, 2018 at 8:20 AM
Well done! You nailed it. Good luck in the contest.
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