Lucky 8

Its not a great  REVELATION   
men detest  PULCHRITUDE  in women 
they ADORE ladies with sexy sublimation 
so DISCOMFORT not their fantasy ladies  
be the PARAGON of perfection and CHARISMA   
BLAZE your figure EIGHT mama, its no enigma 
why men compare women to mercedes . 

JULY 23, 2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Ashley Avatar
July 23, 2018 at 9:16 PM
The required words melt into the beauty of your potent poem, Pixie. Excellent poetry! Best wishes for a win! ~Susan
Warrior Avatar
July 23, 2018 at 4:09 PM
Well crafted Pixie...a good luck verse...love & light...^WW^
Rose  Avatar
July 23, 2018 at 5:37 PM
Thank you for reading it WW, have a great evening
Horsman Avatar
July 23, 2018 at 4:03 PM
Oh how clever this poem is Pixie, also love the serious side to it.
Rose  Avatar
July 23, 2018 at 5:35 PM
Some men like perfect cars and woman, but then again some women are like that too, I for one like to keep it real. Thank you for reading
Onclaud Avatar
July 23, 2018 at 11:25 AM
ohh, written with elan and humor i did not even realize the needed words were there, pixie.. well done!..huggs
Rose  Avatar
July 23, 2018 at 5:34 PM
Glad you enjoyed this poem Nette, Thank you for reading
Pandit Avatar
July 23, 2018 at 6:45 AM
Amazing how you managed to include so many words in so few lines..your talents shine, Pixie.
Rose  Avatar
July 23, 2018 at 5:34 PM
Glad you enjoyed my poem today Vij, have a great evening
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