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Lucky 8

I still adore this man who was my lover, his dark smoldering intensity and his blazing kiss. He had charisma that seduced me into his abyss, but soon I found discomfort- dreadful things I did discover. For eight long years he hid a secret life from me! He was a paragon, a handsome, charming, perfect man, and from pulchritude, physical beauty and charm- I ran; the revelation- he was married- and still, I f l e e . . . _________________________ July 6, 2018 Poetry/Rhyme/Lucky 8 Copyright Protected, ID 18-1038-686-01 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Rhyme Time 5- Lucky 8 sponsor, Laura Loo First Place

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Date: 8/2/2018 7:57:00 PM
Beautiful piece,Dear poet...Congrats on your well deserved win...
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Date: 8/1/2018 1:41:00 PM
Congrats.
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Date: 8/1/2018 1:35:00 AM
Congratulations, Constance on your first position win.
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Date: 7/31/2018 9:10:00 PM
Congratulations on your #1 win. Well done!
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Date: 7/9/2018 11:31:00 AM
very well done, these are not easy words to weave a story around...good luck in the contest
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Date: 7/7/2018 7:28:00 AM
Whoa.. this is a winner! Love that last line...
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Date: 7/7/2018 5:57:00 AM
Well done with this Constance...there are words for people like this...Sorry can't use them here...Best of luck in the contest...Charlie
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Date: 7/6/2018 4:53:00 PM
I hope your heart will heal Constance. May God give you peace. Blessings Carl
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Date: 7/6/2018 4:37:00 PM
Eight years ... what a love rat Constance!:-( hugs jan xx
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