Lucky

When a fetus or baby, I then could have been:

          Born to mother who died, or with father unknown
          Into poverty born in a nation not free
          With impairments or problems I've never outgrown
          Or by parents aborted if she, not a he.

                    I was lucky

When a child and teenager, I could have been:

           A delinquent or orphan or war refugee
           Or abandoned or crippled, for child labor used
           Without friends, joy, or future or dead from OD
           Or unschooled or deprived or unloved or abused.

                     I was lucky

When full-grown in my prime, I could also have been:

            An inebriate, parasite, vagrant, or jailed
            Or been killed in a war or had not met my wife
            Unemployed or an entrepreneur who had failed
            Or severely depressed or had taken my life.

                      I was lucky

And I could in the decades that followed have been:

            Unexpectedly fired, into bankruptcy forced
            By an accident maimed, watching children go bad
            Or a victim of crime or been sued or divorced
            Or betrayed by a friend, or gone stark, raving mad.

                       I was lucky

With retirement approaching, I then could have been:

            From my children estranged, mourning death of my wife
            Or investing unwisely or homeless or broke
            Having manic disorders or bored with my life
            Or in hospital bed with a cancer or stroke.

                        I was lucky

Over eighty, like many my age I could be:

            With no pension or savings or family left
            Or dependent on charity, begging, or theft
            In a nursing home languishing, sad and confined
            All alone and an invalid, witless, or blind.

                        I am lucky (or blessed)

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Date: 6/22/2018 10:25:00 PM
Richard, I was "lucky" to read your incredible work tonight!
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Date: 6/22/2018 11:33:00 AM
I love this Richard.Your understanding of how precarious life can be and your compassion for others shines through along with your appreciation of how you have been blessed.
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Date: 6/22/2018 5:21:00 PM
Thank you very much. I suppose what I was actually doing was counting my blessings over the years.
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