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Luck

Hard luck
Luck.
I hoped to gift you
with my tears
to adorn your
crown with a
somber face
and a land of soul
with banished smile.
But hard luck
Luck!
I tongued clean 
the salty tears.
Hard luck.
Better luck the
next dream-wreck!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/14/2015 9:55:00 AM
discrete, lovely, incisive, well crafted and beautifully portrayed. I am happy to come across this wonderful piece....
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Sulakshana Bhattacharya
Date: 4/14/2015 12:30:00 PM
Thanks Funom. Happy to hear such a nice comment from a wonderful poet like you. :)

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