Lucifer

When I was sad, you made me laugh
When I cried , you were the only one by my side
When I was afraid, you made me brave
Now that you're not here, My mind is clear
You cared enough, to build me up
For when you make me fall, careful to make sure I would drop the ball
You lent me your ear, so you could still the soul to my tears
All those times , you were manipulating me to become your ali
A master in disguise, riding me alongside
Silly me to trust, foolish me what was I thinking of
A fault of mine to claim, though you were the reason I was pained
The whole timeyou were the cloud full of heavy rain, 
And that day you were the one who persuayed me to miss "the" train

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 7/22/2013 1:12:00 PM
I really like it ! there is always something (The Devil) that try to stop us from reaching a goal. this is great ~MJB
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Date: 4/21/2013 7:57:00 PM
Kori, Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week :-) it has been an honor spotting your poem on the soups home page. Take care, and have yourself a lovely- GOODNIGHT **LINDA**
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Date: 4/10/2013 9:22:00 AM
This does not have to be about religion. You can apply that to anyone that intentionally tries to stop you from missing your greatest blessings by dragging you down with them. I know a lot of people can relate. Thank you to all that comments. I really appreciate it, it does mean a lot to me. Please leave your comments and rate it.
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Date: 3/27/2013 12:01:00 PM
Excellent spill of emotions here within this write of yours. Welcom to Poetry Soup..hope to read more from you..regards INK-U-SCRIPT
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Date: 3/27/2013 10:41:00 AM
Thanks for thr read for the middle of the week.
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