Lucid Sky

Falling
Sweetly kissing, she
She 
Living but dead
Truly she is 
A bitter nightmare
That I can never kiss
But still my 
Sweet, sweet dreams
Of blissful scars
A dream filled with me
And me 
And me 
And the delusions of we
Now I’m falling,
Falling back to the skies of reality.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
August 2, 2011 at 3:15 PM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest Guy-Adler. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol
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July 7, 2011 at 9:44 PM
There is just something about this piece that kept me reading it over and over. I cannot quite place why I am so enamored with this piece you have so beautifully penned, but I am. Congrats on the feature, it is definitely well deserved. I think this will have to go into my favs. Thank you for this, truly. Madison
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July 9, 2011 at 1:14 PM
I am gratefull that you enjoyed my poem, and thank you for adding it to your fav =). Love Guy-Adler
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July 5, 2011 at 6:10 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Guy-Adler. May your poetry bring inspiration to others as they read it. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
January 30, 2011 at 6:59 PM
Good expressions well worded on Lucid sky with metaphor, Guy
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