Lucid Dreams

Last night I dreamt that I was dancing in soft foggy mists designed in pearly bows, frolicking from thin fluffy silver waves- blanketing moonlit skies within hour less hills and jasmine fields free flowing through blue bliss lakes, in lucid motions, as seamless ripples reflect a sweet rhapsody of a golden rose sprouting amidst glistening rays, as I name mauve stars with your love
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Kendrick Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 2:30 PM
Back with congratulations on this great winning work. Way to go. Keep on writing. Sara K
Kerr Avatar
November 14, 2023 at 2:39 PM
Hi Ink Empress, Congratulations on your selection in Robert’s contest with this deeply evocative Nonet. It oozes grace, heavenly hue-laden lines, and a towering imagination. A poetic feast Kind regards Howard
Poet Avatar
November 14, 2023 at 12:45 PM
Back with hearty congratulations on your well deserved win with this lovely Nonet dear Ink. Blessings
Poet Avatar
November 9, 2023 at 9:24 AM
Dear Ink, Your aptitude for crafting Nonet is truly commendable. I was captivated by the intricate nuances portrayed through your perceptive gaze and your remarkable proficiency in employing eloquent metaphors. Your ability to paint vivid imagery with meticulous precision is truly extraordinary. Your composition possesses a remarkable level of descriptiveness, evoking subtle yet profound inspiration. I must confess, that I aspire to possess such mastery in my writing.
Kendrick Avatar
November 9, 2023 at 6:37 AM
Very descriptive work you have penned in this one. Glad you had such a nice dream. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara K
Buhagiar Avatar
November 9, 2023 at 1:29 AM
A great double nonet. with beautiful imagery. You are the best for nonets. Blessings.
Empress Avatar
November 9, 2023 at 6:17 AM
Thank you so much for your feedback truly grateful
Silence Avatar
November 9, 2023 at 1:12 AM
The breathtaking beauty of your words, the imagery flowing so freely and gracefully..a profound piece about a love so ethereal. I can’t even quote a few lines in this piece, it wouldn’t do it Justice..the whole of it fits so flawlessly, not to leave any part of this divine ink behind. As always, I’m left awestruck..my words don’t do justice
Empress Avatar
November 9, 2023 at 6:00 AM
Ahh my beautiful soul sis! You are the sweetest. Truly i am so grateful for you!
Rolland Avatar
November 8, 2023 at 10:27 PM
really a beautiful poem, every image is so subtle and inspiring, would have liked to write like this, thanks poet have anice day
Empress Avatar
November 9, 2023 at 5:40 AM
Awwn thank you so very much truly for your kind and supportive feedback
Hind Avatar
November 8, 2023 at 6:48 PM
Just beautiful. I loved the end and the freedom your love seems to bring written in this.
Empress Avatar
November 9, 2023 at 5:18 AM
Awwn you are too sweet thank you so much for being so kind and supportive
One Avatar
November 8, 2023 at 6:24 PM
You do these forms so well... you have done so many now and perfected them all.. nice to see a double nonet.. I could see the lucidity in your dreams from your poem...
Empress Avatar
November 9, 2023 at 5:17 AM
Ah all thanks to you for teaching me forms, way before i got on soup, thank you so much for your supportive comment! Seeing your comment made my day! Always an honour to hear from you! Im so glad u see the lucidity in my dreams.
Parker Avatar
November 8, 2023 at 3:56 PM
How free your creative spirit is in defining the undefined world with this poetic verse that takes the reader on an intimate journey through a misty realm...Dear Poet
Empress Avatar
November 9, 2023 at 5:15 AM
Dear Frederick you are so kind, and thoughtful to leave such a beautiful comment, truly i am grateful , for your generous response. Thank you so much
Dietrich Avatar
November 8, 2023 at 12:57 PM
I would sure love a lucid dream like THIS one. Beautiful words, my friend. You are experimenting with many forms. That's so great.
Empress Avatar
November 9, 2023 at 5:09 AM
Ah this was really a beautiful lucid dream that i had. Ah. Love nonets and etherees, i do them alot . Thank you so much for all your support and kindness
Baker Avatar
November 8, 2023 at 10:28 AM
I like the way you dream, my friend. They are just like your poetry, beautiful imagery and entertaining. A lovely Double Nonet, Ink Empress. I like the last line the best, "as I name mauve stars with your love". Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
Empress Avatar
November 9, 2023 at 5:07 AM
Thank you so much Bill, nonets and etherees are my fave forms i do them alot, and this was actually a real dream ahh some dreams are beautiful.. grateful for your support
Pandit Avatar
November 8, 2023 at 9:41 AM
jasmine fields free flowing through blue bliss lakes--a sweet rhapsody of a golden rose sprouting amidst glistening rays---O, what a dream! Yet another FAVE for this gem, Ink.
Empress Avatar
November 9, 2023 at 5:03 AM
Thank you so very much always for your thoughtful comments, and also for the fave. Im truly grateful for your support and your poetic presence
Onpaper Avatar
November 8, 2023 at 8:48 AM
Last night I dreamt that I was dancing in soft foggy mists … aaah I have 1 question!! Did u wear spf ae?? But that scenery thooooo… ooo it’s like a setting bliss of the moon.. jasmine fields free flowing through blue bliss lakes..mmmmm..ripples reflect a sweet rhapsody of a golden rose .. sheer perfection!!! I love this ending I name mauve stars with your love papi!! This piece is woven is pure artistry
Empress Avatar
November 9, 2023 at 4:35 AM
Awwn thank you so much papi! You always make my day. Appreciate your support ae. Its been raining since u left me lol haha
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