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Lucid Dreams

Last night I dreamt that I was dancing in soft foggy mists designed in pearly bows, frolicking from thin fluffy silver waves- blanketing moonlit skies within hour less hills and jasmine fields free flowing through blue bliss lakes, in lucid motions, as seamless ripples reflect a sweet rhapsody of a golden rose sprouting amidst glistening rays, as I name mauve stars with your love

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/17/2023 2:30:00 PM

Back with congratulations on this great winning work. Way to go. Keep on writing. Sara K

Howard Kerr

Date: 11/14/2023 2:39:00 PM

Hi Ink Empress, Congratulations on your selection in Robert’s contest with this deeply evocative Nonet. It oozes grace, heavenly hue-laden lines, and a towering imagination. A poetic feast Kind regards Howard

Sotto Poet

Date: 11/14/2023 12:45:00 PM

Back with hearty congratulations on your well deserved win with this lovely Nonet dear Ink. Blessings

Sotto Poet

Date: 11/9/2023 9:24:00 AM

Dear Ink, Your aptitude for crafting Nonet is truly commendable. I was captivated by the intricate nuances portrayed through your perceptive gaze and your remarkable proficiency in employing eloquent metaphors. Your ability to paint vivid imagery with meticulous precision is truly extraordinary. Your composition possesses a remarkable level of descriptiveness, evoking subtle yet profound inspiration. I must confess, that I aspire to possess such mastery in my writing.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/9/2023 6:37:00 AM

Very descriptive work you have penned in this one. Glad you had such a nice dream. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara K

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/9/2023 1:29:00 AM

A great double nonet. with beautiful imagery. You are the best for nonets. Blessings.

Ink Empress
Date: 11/9/2023 6:17:00 AM

Thank you so much for your feedback truly grateful

Fading Star Silence

Date: 11/9/2023 1:12:00 AM

The breathtaking beauty of your words, the imagery flowing so freely and gracefully..a profound piece about a love so ethereal. I can’t even quote a few lines in this piece, it wouldn’t do it Justice..the whole of it fits so flawlessly, not to leave any part of this divine ink behind. As always, I’m left awestruck..my words don’t do justice

Ink Empress
Date: 11/9/2023 6:00:00 AM

Ahh my beautiful soul sis! You are the sweetest. Truly i am so grateful for you!

Yann Rolland

Date: 11/8/2023 10:27:00 PM

really a beautiful poem, every image is so subtle and inspiring, would have liked to write like this, thanks poet have anice day

Ink Empress
Date: 11/9/2023 5:40:00 AM

Awwn thank you so very much truly for your kind and supportive feedback

Paige Hind

Date: 11/8/2023 6:48:00 PM

Just beautiful. I loved the end and the freedom your love seems to bring written in this.

Ink Empress
Date: 11/9/2023 5:18:00 AM

Awwn you are too sweet thank you so much for being so kind and supportive

Silent One

Date: 11/8/2023 6:24:00 PM

You do these forms so well... you have done so many now and perfected them all.. nice to see a double nonet.. I could see the lucidity in your dreams from your poem...

Ink Empress
Date: 11/9/2023 5:17:00 AM

Ah all thanks to you for teaching me forms, way before i got on soup, thank you so much for your supportive comment! Seeing your comment made my day! Always an honour to hear from you! Im so glad u see the lucidity in my dreams.

Frederic Parker

Date: 11/8/2023 3:56:00 PM

How free your creative spirit is in defining the undefined world with this poetic verse that takes the reader on an intimate journey through a misty realm...Dear Poet

Ink Empress
Date: 11/9/2023 5:15:00 AM

Dear Frederick you are so kind, and thoughtful to leave such a beautiful comment, truly i am grateful , for your generous response. Thank you so much

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/8/2023 3:08:00 PM

what a magnificently beautiful poem and dream, dear Ink. I loved the romantic touch at the end. Your words and images flowed just like a lucid dream, and I didn't want to wake up. Am faving this one for reading and enjoying later. Wishing you a splendid evening, dearest Ink. Know you're a master whom I aspire to be...Sara

Ink Empress
Date: 11/9/2023 5:10:00 AM

Oh you are a way better poet than i am beautiful sara, i wish and aspire to be as prolific as you one day! Thank you so very much kind soul. Appreciate your support always

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/8/2023 12:57:00 PM

I would sure love a lucid dream like THIS one. Beautiful words, my friend. You are experimenting with many forms. That's so great.

Ink Empress
Date: 11/9/2023 5:09:00 AM

Ah this was really a beautiful lucid dream that i had. Ah. Love nonets and etherees, i do them alot . Thank you so much for all your support and kindness

Bill Baker

Date: 11/8/2023 10:28:00 AM

I like the way you dream, my friend. They are just like your poetry, beautiful imagery and entertaining. A lovely Double Nonet, Ink Empress. I like the last line the best, "as I name mauve stars with your love". Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Ink Empress
Date: 11/9/2023 5:07:00 AM

Thank you so much Bill, nonets and etherees are my fave forms i do them alot, and this was actually a real dream ahh some dreams are beautiful.. grateful for your support

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/8/2023 9:41:00 AM

jasmine fields free flowing through blue bliss lakes--a sweet rhapsody of a golden rose sprouting amidst glistening rays---O, what a dream! Yet another FAVE for this gem, Ink.

Ink Empress
Date: 11/9/2023 5:03:00 AM

Thank you so very much always for your thoughtful comments, and also for the fave. Im truly grateful for your support and your poetic presence

Lioness Onpaper

Date: 11/8/2023 8:48:00 AM

Last night I dreamt that I was dancing in soft foggy mists … aaah I have 1 question!! Did u wear spf ae?? But that scenery thooooo… ooo it’s like a setting bliss of the moon.. jasmine fields free flowing through blue bliss lakes..mmmmm..ripples reflect a sweet rhapsody of a golden rose .. sheer perfection!!! I love this ending I name mauve stars with your love papi!! This piece is woven is pure artistry

Ink Empress
Date: 11/9/2023 4:35:00 AM

Awwn thank you so much papi! You always make my day. Appreciate your support ae. Its been raining since u left me lol haha