Lucid Dream Ink


A dream in tune with waking world,
meanings grasp conscious unfurled,
alive alliteration aligned,
beautifully poised and perfectly timed.

Lucid dreamer weaving webs,
create rising tide that never ebbs,
perihelion pendulum swung medallion,
riding thought speed's unbroken stallion.

All the while the rising tide grows,
does atmosphere expand does water overflow,
brain makes madness meandering call,
beckoning stars to earth they slowly fall.

Full lotus seated at Everest peak,
three eye's sight voice of mind to speak,
conducting planet's orchestral symphony,
nature moves to wave of hands rhapsody.

Awake in tune with sleeping world,
meanings grasp unconscious unfurled,
alive alliteration aligned again,
pen poised perfection safe from meaningless ink stain.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 11/1/2014 8:14:00 PM
truly outstanding pen david beautifully painted excellent piece
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Date: 1/3/2013 10:02:00 PM
David, a love the moving nature. perfect ink. love the stain ~Luv*SKAT
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Date: 12/25/2012 1:05:00 AM
love 'alive alliteration aligned again' what a line, and mery Christmas to you David xx
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Date: 12/24/2012 9:24:00 PM
David, Once again, we find ourselves trapped in the Holiday Season. And, hear I am stopping by to say Hi and to wish you a Merry Christmas once again sincerely from my heart. Loving each moment I found comforting here on the soup. Thank you for any comment or support you have offered now or in the past. Love always & forever ~ PD
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Date: 12/23/2012 6:30:00 PM
This is really cosmic! I love it! You are really great in uttering such a beautiful words in such beautiful stanzas, I really enjoyed my moment when reading yours :), i will fave this one :D thanks for sharing ^^
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