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Lucid

Swirling, Twirling, Spinning, Think you're close to Winning. Fumbling, Tumbling, Falling, Too close to be Calling. Skipping, Tripping, Switching, There's just too much that's Missing. Shaking, Quaking, Breaking, Too hard to be Faking. Cursing, Screaming, Hitting, Too soon to be Quitting. Telling, Failing, Bailing, It's time for the Un-veiling. Singing, Ringing, Ding-ing, Wake Up! -- You're only Dreaming.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/25/2011 4:14:00 PM
Congratulations on having this poem featured. This is very good and fun
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Date: 5/25/2011 1:15:00 PM
Impressive and fun.
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Date: 5/24/2011 5:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, paulette
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Date: 5/23/2011 4:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Paulette. Love, Carol
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