Lucid

Swirling,
	Twirling,
		Spinning,
Think you're close to Winning.

Fumbling,
	Tumbling,
		Falling,
Too close to be Calling.

Skipping, 
	Tripping,
		Switching,
There's just too much that's Missing.

Shaking,
	Quaking,
		Breaking,
Too hard to be Faking.

Cursing,
	Screaming,
		Hitting,
Too soon to be Quitting.

Telling,
	Failing,
		Bailing,
It's time for the Un-veiling.

Singing, 
	Ringing,
		Ding-ing,
Wake Up! -- You're only Dreaming.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Clark Avatar
May 25, 2011 at 4:14 PM
Congratulations on having this poem featured. This is very good and fun
Eastman Avatar
May 25, 2011 at 1:15 PM
Impressive and fun.
Mehta Avatar
May 24, 2011 at 5:17 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, paulette
Brown Avatar
May 23, 2011 at 4:56 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Paulette. Love, Carol
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