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Loyalty To My Ex

You love him, you want him
He doesn’t want you
You’ve had no one for so long
just the person that you knew
He’s stuck in your head
Glued to your mind
Friends say forget him
There’s new guys to find

The loyalty shown,
You never did cheat,
His love was enough
For you to retreat
You thought you were comfortable 
the relationship shared
Was so pure with love 
That you wasn’t aware

The evil, the nasty
He was drifting from you
The sweet caring person, that you thought that you knew
Was gone, what was left?
Just a stranger behind
His love had run out, the truth could not hide
You try to move on,
but there’s no way you could
You feel nothing but empty
where true love once stood.

By Rosie Hill

Copyright © Rosie Hill | Year Posted 2019

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Phil Capitano Date: 2/3/2019 7:21:00 AM With genders reversed, I too, can relate. You put everything into a relationship and then you hit the iceberg and visions of the Titanic flash in your head. Login to Reply Rosie Hill Date: 2/6/2019 7:21:00 PM I completely agree, we are all in heart break together xx

Sandra L. Weiss Date: 2/2/2019 6:59:00 PM I really appreciate this verse done so well. It flows so well, for a non flowing subject. I can so relate, as I think many would. Happened to me, and the moving on part...so difficult after what seems a lifetime. Beautifully written, Rosie. Login to Reply Rosie Hill Date: 2/6/2019 7:21:00 PM Thankyou so much, I’m so glad you enjoyed it. Probably my favourite poem that I have wrote due to the easy flow and the way I poured the words out. Xx

Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 1/16/2019 12:58:00 PM Hello Rosie Hill, I understand this poem so well. I was married for 4years onthe 4th year we went to Cuba and it was there that he cheated on me. Not on the second week we were there the 2nd day, For two hours in her bedroom. He came out head hanging low, she was very cheerful. So i do understand your poem. Login to Reply Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 1/17/2019 1:21:00 PM Hello Rosie Hill, I want to say thank you for creating this poem,for people like me that had closure, until now. I believe if reading the right poem, it will heal you. This is the second poem that has healed me. I have moved on. Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 1/17/2019 1:11:00 PM hello Rosie Hill, Closure is what I am looking for. Yes your Poem has given me closure, thank you so much.You are right I am not alone in this pain. I am making this poem my fav. Thank you once again my friend, Rosie Hill Date: 1/16/2019 1:27:00 PM I reallly Sympathise with you, it’s a horrible thing to go through. But I hope my poem gave you some closure and know you aren’t alone in the pain. X

Michael Wise Date: 1/13/2019 7:21:00 PM This is very well written. Love the flow. U express yourself nicely. This is the good that can come from the bad. Writing is therapeutic, isn't it? :) Login to Reply Michael Wise Date: 1/13/2019 7:50:00 PM My pleasure. Writing poetry does the same for me. It's a wonderful creative outlet. Keep them coming Rosie. :) Rosie Hill Date: 1/13/2019 7:23:00 PM I totally agree, so therapeutic- I almost feel like I’m cleansing my soul of any emotion I’ve ever felt by putting it into words as a poem. I’ve never found a better way to deal with my feelings. Thankyou, I’m glad you’ve enjoyed reading it

Caren Krutsinger Date: 1/12/2019 6:30:00 PM I cannot imagine, but thanks to this poem, you have startled my imagination a bit. Login to Reply Rosie Hill Date: 1/12/2019 6:33:00 PM I’m glad I have, my ex was my first love and I’ve never been able to get closure when we broke up.