Rosie Hill Poet Free verse

Loyalty To My Ex

You love him, you want him
He doesn’t want you
You’ve had no one for so long
just the person that you knew
He’s stuck in your head
Glued to your mind
Friends say forget him
There’s new guys to find

The loyalty shown,
You never did cheat,
His love was enough
For you to retreat
You thought you were comfortable 
the relationship shared
Was so pure with love 
That you wasn’t aware

The evil, the nasty
He was drifting from you
The sweet caring person, that you thought that you knew
Was gone, what was left?
Just a stranger behind
His love had run out, the truth could not hide
You try to move on,
but there’s no way you could
You feel nothing but empty
where true love once stood.

By Rosie Hill

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Phil Capitano February 3, 2019 at 7:21 AM With genders reversed, I too, can relate. You put everything into a relationship and then you hit the iceberg and visions of the Titanic flash in your head. Rosie Hill February 6, 2019 at 7:21 PM I completely agree, we are all in heart break together xx

Darlene De Beaulieu January 16, 2019 at 12:58 PM Hello Rosie Hill, I understand this poem so well. I was married for 4years onthe 4th year we went to Cuba and it was there that he cheated on me. Not on the second week we were there the 2nd day, For two hours in her bedroom. He came out head hanging low, she was very cheerful. So i do understand your poem. Darlene De Beaulieu January 17, 2019 at 1:21 PM Hello Rosie Hill, I want to say thank you for creating this poem,for people like me that had closure, until now. I believe if reading the right poem, it will heal you. This is the second poem that has healed me. I have moved on. Darlene De Beaulieu January 17, 2019 at 1:11 PM hello Rosie Hill, Closure is what I am looking for. Yes your Poem has given me closure, thank you so much.You are right I am not alone in this pain. I am making this poem my fav. Thank you once again my friend, Rosie Hill January 16, 2019 at 1:27 PM I reallly Sympathise with you, it’s a horrible thing to go through. But I hope my poem gave you some closure and know you aren’t alone in the pain. X

Michael Wise January 13, 2019 at 7:21 PM This is very well written. Love the flow. U express yourself nicely. This is the good that can come from the bad. Writing is therapeutic, isn't it? :) Michael Wise January 13, 2019 at 7:50 PM My pleasure. Writing poetry does the same for me. It's a wonderful creative outlet. Keep them coming Rosie. :) Rosie Hill January 13, 2019 at 7:23 PM I totally agree, so therapeutic- I almost feel like I’m cleansing my soul of any emotion I’ve ever felt by putting it into words as a poem. I’ve never found a better way to deal with my feelings. Thankyou, I’m glad you’ve enjoyed reading it

Caren Krutsinger January 12, 2019 at 6:30 PM I cannot imagine, but thanks to this poem, you have startled my imagination a bit. Rosie Hill January 12, 2019 at 6:33 PM I’m glad I have, my ex was my first love and I’ve never been able to get closure when we broke up.