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Loyalty Bleeding

each kiss is a tear every touch a blood drop breeding pain and fear from bottom to top our brutal love rages on and on beneath heaven above above sweetness come and gone darkest night falls down hitting with a resounding thud in your arms I drown in an abyss of evil crud your abundance of addictions and multitudes of lies all of love's afflictions can be seen in my eyes but no matter how absurd I have made the vows that must be honored the forevers and the nows

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Date: 11/11/2016 11:16:00 AM
A beautiful poem Christy...I checked out your web page...well done
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Date: 11/11/2016 7:09:00 AM
I can relate to this dark love poem except the lies, addictions to drugs or wine, . Love can be absurd yet Sth makes us stick on. Kudos for this deep emotive stark poem. Pls do comment my latest poem too. I have written quite a few professional poems but I wish u review my simpler light newest one pleeeez.
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Date: 11/11/2016 6:38:00 AM
This one touched my heart with its sadness, pain and frustration. But it is also beautifully written and there seems to be a light at the end of the tunnel. Really nicely done Christy
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Date: 11/11/2016 4:50:00 AM
I love this poem I'm very speechless... Raw talent.... Love Trice
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Date: 11/11/2016 3:22:00 AM
IT IS OBVIOUS, YOU ARE A VERY TALENTED WRITER. VERY MUCH APPRECIATED
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Date: 11/11/2016 3:20:00 AM
IT IS OBVIOUS, YOU ARE VERY TALENTED IN WRIYING
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Date: 11/10/2016 11:39:00 PM
It's hard to comment on this one, though the poetry is great, it is very sad too! I am glad things are much better now.
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