Loyal Bride

Ignorance must be stitch inside Because I've believed every word lied The price of a loyal bride On the outward I now hide Pain crumbling my heart inside The price of a loyal bride Rumors spread, but I put them to mute Saving your name while you covered it with soot Until blindness wore off my then dimmed sight And I was shockingly aware they were right You whisper her name in your dreams at night I wanna tell you I know, but I don't wanna fight Afraid you'll leave the commitment we made For someone whom's body you've layed Though truth is no longer denied I'll still hold to you while you backslide The price of a loyal bride And to my vows I will abide No matter sleepless nights I've cried The price of a loyal bride

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Justin Bordner

Date: 2/12/2013 11:42:00 AM

Being loyal to one's own detriment is fascinating, and common - perhaps the purpose of loyalty is to accept, and forgive another's pain & indiscretion, but wheres the sugar in that - we can trap ourselves with loyalty, or we can administer it's credit as a strength and be worshipped for it - its a strange quality - thanks Jessica, for composing lucid art that stimulates my intellect - J.A.B. %

Matthew Anish

Date: 5/14/2012 4:13:00 PM

Is this a true story or did you just invent it? Any way such things are quite common. Interesting! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Jay Loveless

Date: 5/14/2012 10:22:00 AM

Wow, this is powerful. It stabs me in the heart like a poisonous blade and captivates me. No, loyal bride you should no longer lye loyal and in silence. Scream. Yell. Find your righteousness. For if he whispers her name in his sleep, it is of her he dreams. And your time will be wasted. You will find someone else who will be a loyal groom. But for now, this time you must yell and scream and find the truth. Don't let him be afraid to leave the commitment either, because he wont stop..

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/10/2012 6:43:00 AM

Wish you all the best Jessica, touching poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Jessica K
Date: 5/14/2012 6:58:00 AM

Thank you Anne :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/8/2012 4:13:00 PM

Staying with someone who is unfaithful is not easy..Forgiveness is not easy but can be achieved..The question is does the groom intend to be faithful henceforth?..If not, is the conditions of the marriage worth staying in a marriage where one will never know if they are being exposed to STD, hearthbreak, etc..Much to think about..Good work expressing the topic..Thanks for stopping by..I am glad that you got a laugh out of my work about the chocolate..Sara

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 5/8/2012 2:17:00 PM

This is good, but sad. It is the price that some women have to pay for being a Loyal bride. This is the time when you have to make a choice. Many blessings. Lucilla

Jessica K
Date: 5/14/2012 6:59:00 AM

Yes, very true Lucila :)I thank you for reading it

David Williams

Date: 5/8/2012 8:47:00 AM

Jessica heartbreaking to know you may well have to choose one day, loyalty is a strong bond which is why it hurts forever when it's broken..David

Jessica K
Date: 5/14/2012 6:58:00 AM

Agreed wholeheartedly, David. Thank you for reading it

Michael Smith

Date: 5/8/2012 8:10:00 AM

This painful to read. Your words so telling. I shamefully admit I used to be the man you write about. The Lord helped me to see the error of my ways. You or the write deserves more than this man can give.

Jessica K
Date: 5/14/2012 7:00:00 AM

That's why we can thank God for second chances! Thank you for your time :)

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 5/7/2012 3:35:00 PM

Wow..this was an amazing write here Jessica!!

Jessica K
Date: 5/7/2012 9:47:00 PM

Thanks G :)