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Low Life Sun Spilt Rays

a lemony Sun~~squirt its juice onto laid squinting eyes~~on a beach


2019 December 31
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December 31, 2019 at 12:09 PM
Powerful, and written well. I love the pic as well... Excellent all around. Ann
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December 31, 2019 at 12:18 PM
That is nice of you Ann, thank you and best wishes in the New Year~@wk
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