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a lemony Sun~~squirt its juice onto laid squinting eyes~~on a beach 2019 December 31

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Date: 12/31/2019 12:09:00 PM
Powerful, and written well. I love the pic as well... Excellent all around. Ann
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Date: 12/31/2019 12:18:00 PM
That is nice of you Ann, thank you and best wishes in the New Year~@wk

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