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Do you love me Do you think I am smart Do you appreciate me Do you look at me, what do you see When you hit me does it hurt you When you call me stupid does it emasculate you When I comfort you Am I beneath you When you look at me what do you see It hurts when you hit me It enrages me when you call me stupid It empowers me to know I comfort you Look at me now what do you see I don't love you I am above you intellectually I am calculating, cunning Look at me, my back is the last you'll see. The Love of your life The small contributions you made The small man that you are The minutiae of nothing I walk tall, with a soulful stride You walk fast trying to catch me I am the winner You're a survivor I am no longer broken I am no longer weak I am a woman Then I drop a coin in your cup

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 1/18/2013 6:42:00 PM
This is a very heartfelt poem. Elba - don't ever let anyone put you down. When something dosn't work, it wasn't meant to be. Smile - Jesus loves you. Lucilla
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Date: 1/9/2013 9:16:00 PM
Elba, i like the way you end the poem... the winner... good going...pd
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Date: 1/9/2013 11:46:00 AM
WOW! very painful. It is not okay to hit. Abusive relationship are sometimes hard to get out of but compliments to those that have the courage to walk away. This is a very interesting write, and heart felt. Thanks for sharing. great job on this.
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