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Low Beyond Low

each day that winter trudges onward my spirit sinks to a low beyond low my cold heart turns away whoever is there trying to tell me I begin to freeze from the skin to the skin to the veins of bluecold blood that take me no where no where except depression bring my my blanket my cup of tea I don't really even care whats on tv I cant read or work put two thoughts together I continue to freeze from the skin to the skin and long for the healing warmth of sun yellow sun

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/20/2010 5:36:00 PM
Hi Veronica, Now that's a nice cold poem... The ending is my favorite. You know, the yellow sun!!! I think a lot of people around the world have been needing that. Cheer up. Don't binge on ice cream (LOL) Spring is getting closer. Smiles, Dane Ann God be with you.
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Date: 1/19/2010 8:54:00 AM
I can relate to this one, needing that sunshine in my life right now. I want to thank you for your kind comments on my blog. I foud great comfort in your words. Smiles from Lolita
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