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Low Beam

This low beam flies high Searching for news in the skies The answers drown only to come back around through the glow of simplicity sticks and Downtown vintage tricks and She’ll remain rain with drops of blame to entertain that Lack and you know how hard the mother fought to bring that flower back. Seeds and Pleads She watered guilt Spilt From her eyes Planting and panting away her demise Under attack The light slumbered under sound The poison grew dark Red Spread Rapidly Down This love that you spoke of has fallen apart! She shouts. She failed to sprout! Broken token of unspoken deeds and doubts! This low beam flies skies Looking for broken souls in the night The distance travels slow growing old and On these streets These pricy streets and On these streets Excess meat and Simple strangers nod Believe in my God! and They’re all pretending to know who you are. Acknowledgement well spent The cracked pavement reflecting his payment and Broken down sins He don’t shake The grin. He packs. And you know how hard the soldier fought to bring that flower back. This low beam flies and Illusions rush and Make you touch and Breathe what isn’t This low beam flies and Reality plunders and Makes you wonder and Breathe what is. ©2011 xx L.A.

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Date: 8/14/2012 3:24:00 AM
i like wow, elegant imagination
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Date: 11/16/2011 6:44:00 AM
Congratulations on being featured this week Laura. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/16/2011 2:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Laura
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Date: 7/25/2011 10:52:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup...enjoy the site with its many features as u continue to share creative poetry as this gem with luv..
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Date: 7/25/2011 7:00:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Laura. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 7/25/2011 10:10:00 AM
Hi Carol, Thank for the very warm welcome to PoetrySoup! I just started writing poetry again and I'm here to test the waters and see what people think! I will definitely return the favor for others. I wish you a pleasant day =)
Date: 7/24/2011 10:58:00 PM
welcome to poetrysoup, an amazing write, very well put together
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Date: 7/25/2011 10:05:00 AM
Thanks Stephan! Glad you like it =)
Date: 7/24/2011 7:04:00 PM
Very creative and interesting write, Laura
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La Leurentop
Date: 7/25/2011 10:02:00 AM
Thank you very much =) I enjoyed your writing as well!
Date: 7/24/2011 6:45:00 PM
nice
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Date: 7/25/2011 9:53:00 AM
Thank you =)

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