Lovitivity V2

Times integrity brings structure for 
all admirers whom are confused
And its measure creates order for
every affair that are disordered
In Our passion, in love, We are satisfied
And in Our love We embody confirmation
Where are We traveling to, in Our intimate
 Love Train?
If We are stationary, relative to the speed
of the train, are We still moving?
Can observers locate Our destination or fulfillment?
Can Our speed, relative to perspectives, reveal 
Our passion?
Critics look in from the outside on Us
To find any faults that turn up to the observer
While My eyes lock on her beauty
And Your eyes key in Your whole world

Time how long have I waited for swiftness?
And it was not quick
Yet rushed for delay
And it was not tardy
Is Time an illusion?
Lovititivity is love that remains constant
It continues regardless of ones perspective
Nothing fills up space like Love

You are my guiding star through the wilderness 
of love that made it not tangled
The shining moon above its dark nights that made
a way out from the forest
My devotion is deep, I indulge in You
And in My love endures an insatiable will
How long have We journeyed, rocketing to My 
December Moon?
If I pass through space where time slows to a freeze, 
are We still aging?
Can observers determine Our beginning or ending?
Can Our time, relative to interpretation, relate My devotion?
Critics look up from telescopes on Us
To spot any supernovas that appeal to the observer
While My eyes plant on her brightness
And Your eyes harvest Your forever

Look on Us at Our destination
We aged as fast as a minute hand
See Us along Our journey
We aged as slow as a hour hand
Love in flesh who were former soulmates
And in flesh love as red as a second hand 
nonstop every second like a clock

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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