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Loving You All Night

When you caress me tenderly And kiss me with such fervency, I want your loving to last all night, Cause with you it feels so right For my love is like a Spring flower, That grows with each rain shower It comes from every part of me, While always given wholeheartedly

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/5/2009 1:57:00 PM
I love this piece!! - jeremiah
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Date: 5/31/2009 11:13:00 AM
hmmm... very nice! the imagery came alive in my mind! please read my poem "territory" and tell me what you think. regards, stephanie
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Date: 5/10/2009 10:04:00 AM
This shows great spirit, and effort that works well with rhymes, especially unique last couplet. It makes one want to put pen to paper. Thanks, Jan
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Date: 5/8/2009 3:00:00 PM
A love song straight from your precious heart, Janice! Having someone who inspires such beautiful poetry is indeed a blessing. Love to you! Carolyn
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Date: 5/8/2009 1:14:00 PM
Janice, this is true poetry! Yes, I must say deeply passionate and simply beautiful! Love, Shar
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