Loving You

When I first set my eyes on you 
Falling in love was all I could do
you were like the ocean breeze that calm my desire
As we sit and warm ourselves by an open fire

Now loving you seem to be the best of my decisions
for now were both joined as one and share a single vision
to press forward day by day aiming at one sight
because the way I love you makes me feel so right
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Kendrick Avatar
May 16, 2014 at 10:52 AM
because if loving you is wrong I don't want to be right..Seems like a line from a song I once heard..Enjoyed reading your work today..Sara
Russell Avatar
May 16, 2014 at 11:24 AM
Just the way I was feeling at that moment!
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