Loving You

A lone cantata pierced through the hollow night as hungry clouds nibbled at the frozen Moon, Her smile obscured but for a slight, scanty sight as a solo aria pierced the lagoon. Amid the languid yet luminous half-light came the chilling chorus of the Arctic loon. Love lives here, and lingers warm in half moonlight, budding with romantic, symphonious swoon. I watch as you watch the performance enwreathe, loving you fervently with each breath I breathe.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Beaufort Avatar
June 20, 2024 at 1:35 PM
Linda, the way you celebrate nature is wonderful. It's a beautiful scene and described with tenderness and gentleness.
Fowler Avatar
July 13, 2024 at 3:12 PM
My warmest thanks to you Duke. I am glad I can elicit such scenes and feelings with my words. :)
Kibble Avatar
May 27, 2024 at 10:24 PM
Thank you for your visit and nice comments on my poem. Your poem is equally as romantic and lovely. Congrats.
Fowler Avatar
June 15, 2024 at 6:46 AM
Many thanks Sean, and you are welcome for the deserved comments about your alliterative work, Whispers of the dawn. :)
Ashley Avatar
May 27, 2024 at 9:07 AM
Dear Linda, "loving you fervently with each breath I breathe" - what a breathtaking finale to your exquisite poem. I melted into the beautiful imagery to be taken where "love lives". Ravishing, soft as eiderdown romance. Love it and A Fav! I'm honored to share the podium with you, dear poetess. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan
Fowler Avatar
May 27, 2024 at 11:22 AM
Many thanks dear Susan. Your words are always uplifting and supportive. The honor is twice returned. The fav is a bonus and a treat for me. Thank you'! :)
Puddifoot Avatar
May 27, 2024 at 5:01 AM
you've done it again, linda! such a beautiful, romantic little poem; delicate touch on the alliteration, and very atmospheric - congrats on your win in my contest!
Fowler Avatar
May 27, 2024 at 7:41 AM
Hey Charlotte, thanks! I appreciate your contest and placement. Let's do this again! :)
Crandall Avatar
May 25, 2024 at 9:45 PM
Romantic!
Fowler Avatar
May 26, 2024 at 8:16 AM
Good morning Dave. Thanks my friend! :)
George Avatar
May 25, 2024 at 4:08 PM
Love is in the air. I love it. Great lovey-dovey poem Linda. Cheers
Fowler Avatar
May 25, 2024 at 4:58 PM
Thank you Tonye. Nice to see you! :)
Daniel Avatar
May 25, 2024 at 2:36 AM
Moonlight and love, simply awesome:) p. s: I've sent you email:)
Fowler Avatar
May 25, 2024 at 4:57 PM
Many thanks dear Joanna. I have it. :)
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