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Loving You

A lone cantata pierced through the hollow night as hungry clouds nibbled at the frozen Moon, Her smile obscured but for a slight, scanty sight as a solo aria pierced the lagoon. Amid the languid yet luminous half-light came the chilling chorus of the Arctic loon. Love lives here, and lingers warm in half moonlight, budding with romantic, symphonious swoon. I watch as you watch the performance enwreathe, loving you fervently with each breath I breathe.

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Duke Beaufort

Date: 6/20/2024 1:35:00 PM

Linda, the way you celebrate nature is wonderful. It's a beautiful scene and described with tenderness and gentleness.

Sean Kibble

Date: 5/27/2024 10:24:00 PM

Thank you for your visit and nice comments on my poem. Your poem is equally as romantic and lovely. Congrats.

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 6/15/2024 6:46:00 AM

Many thanks Sean, and you are welcome for the deserved comments about your alliterative work, Whispers of the dawn. :)

Susan Ashley

Date: 5/27/2024 9:07:00 AM

Dear Linda, "loving you fervently with each breath I breathe" - what a breathtaking finale to your exquisite poem. I melted into the beautiful imagery to be taken where "love lives". Ravishing, soft as eiderdown romance. Love it and A Fav! I'm honored to share the podium with you, dear poetess. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 5/27/2024 11:22:00 AM

Many thanks dear Susan. Your words are always uplifting and supportive. The honor is twice returned. The fav is a bonus and a treat for me. Thank you'! :)

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 5/27/2024 5:01:00 AM

you've done it again, linda! such a beautiful, romantic little poem; delicate touch on the alliteration, and very atmospheric - congrats on your win in my contest!

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 5/27/2024 7:41:00 AM

Hey Charlotte, thanks! I appreciate your contest and placement. Let's do this again! :)

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 5/26/2024 4:14:00 PM

a wonderfully romantic poem...I liked the fluidity of your rhyme scheme. I especially liked these lines: "Love lives here, and lingers warm in half moonlight, budding with romantic, symphonious swoon." Nicely done, Linda. Wishing you a splendid evening, hugs, Sara

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 5/27/2024 7:40:00 AM

You are so sweet Sara. Thank you for your kind remarks! :)