Loving Sprinkles

Tears rolling down the cheeks
mournfully sighs 
falling in a deep lingering thought 
Whispering inside silently 
I lay a sheepskin rug of purest white
upon the ground for you  

love me not ,want me not 
cause your heart I don't deserve 
The dripping honey from your moon 
cannot preserve the smile 
behind my pale pearled tears

If I could reach up 
grabbing the moon smiling
confetti stars sprinkling them 
all over you sweetly
If only by magic

Nor the diamond dust 
from your confetti stars 
can bring a twinkle to these eyes 
These eyes were baptised 
with too many holy lies 
to ever be disguised 

A soulful howl 
yearning salted lips
cherishing you babe 
within every single teardrop
that falls in your honor 
enchanting rising waves kissing 
each curl embracing fragrant beauty

I'd rather let my spirit free 
to roam in fabled wonders 
that always end ' let not love be' 
I'd rather gaze in a nocturnal sky 
with no one holding me 

Cause I have loved with all I am and be 
To be betrayed,to be deceived 
to be the clown of gaia's destiny 
and now not you or any other,no one my dear 
No one will set me free



written by Liam and Charmaine

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 11/10/2014 9:21:00 AM
Great write. "If I could reach up....
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/10/2014 9:58:00 AM
smiling wonderful comment deeply appreciated thank you kindly
Date: 10/30/2014 11:32:00 PM
Wow... one of your better poems, I'd say. You and Charmaine work well together, loved the contrast. Your last two stanzas moved me profoundly... no one but YOU can choose to be happy. And when you give it everything you have... that's what sets you free. "To be the clown of gaia's destiny"... this line said quite a bit. You compare to living only for the earth as a joke... there are much greater things to be living for :)
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/31/2014 2:27:00 AM
timothy there is a much greater things to live for happiness joy peace and love the reason for living this earth holds nothing without those in the soup charmaine is a blessing to work with on this piece she is such a talented writer wonderful comment pal bless you thank you ever so kindly
Date: 10/30/2014 12:09:00 AM
This is such a beautifully mastered write! Your two wondrous auras came together to form a tremendous piece of art! I really enjoyed reading this excellent poem here this evening! What a delightful poem, Great Work!!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/30/2014 3:55:00 AM
thank you russell trying to draw the teardrops together split down the middle falling for one love calling lovingly sprinkles always over something held deep beautiful in every living memory splashing with charmaines pen i thought wow really came together great have a great day pal
Date: 10/29/2014 7:15:00 PM
lovely collab with charms so scenic and emotive, liam.. this, i like!.. huggs
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/29/2014 7:28:00 PM
smiling nette loving sprinkles we really piled on the waterworks at the end we should of put great niagra falls lol thank you so kindly for the lovely comment
Date: 10/29/2014 3:03:00 PM
Liam and Charma . . . A most powerful and emotive write, but quite sad. I enjoyed your collaborative effort here very much. Most Excellent Work!! A FAV for me because I too like these types of themes very much. Cheers and Spill Ink, Gary
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/29/2014 3:17:00 PM
ah thank you gary dear pal those loving sprinkles really wet the eyes wonderful comment dear friend heartfelt beautiful deeply appreciated with a smile
Date: 10/29/2014 3:00:00 PM
Your ideas are always so beautiful Liam..It was a pleasure to collab with you.Your verses. were very inspiring.Thankyou!Favouriting it!!"
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/29/2014 3:34:00 PM
your words blended so very beautifully charmaine it was fun collab really enjoyed dear friend always a great pleasure jelling together in these writes
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/29/2014 3:11:00 PM
smiling tim no one holding me lol it came together a treat for us dear pal thank you so very kindly for the truly beautiful comment deeply appreciated
Date: 10/29/2014 2:52:00 PM
A sad but magical write liam and Charma .....I'd rather set my spirit free...I'd rather gaze with no one holding me....Such powerful lines...congrats to both Tim
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/29/2014 3:24:00 PM
so sorry tim your answer has gone up the page
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